 KittenKez 12/27/07 . chapter 2It's a lil confusing! Great fic update soon! |
 AKKON 6/20/05 . chapter 2Wow. This is simply brilliant. Looks like it'll never be continued, but it stands just as well on its own. Very beautiful. |
 The Odd Little Turtle 2/21/05 . chapter 2are you going to finish this? |
 Froline-el Vasper 9/7/04 . chapter 2 Oh! I like this one. I was thinking of Silent Hill 3 in the first half of this chapter...very very good . Keep on going with it! |
 argentiumlupus 9/5/04 . chapter 2okay guys, i am officially putting this on hold because i'm writing a fic for a contest. i am in no way going to drop this one. thank you for reviews and hopefully i can get chaptr three going shortly. |
 Sammie 9/4/04 . chapter 2 This was a really good chapter please keep writing |
 Kaitlin Klein 7/22/04 . chapter 2This was a really great chapter with very good character interaction. I can't wait to see what happens. |
 D4rk 4ngel 7/20/04 . chapter 1hey it's me! okay, with your story, I love it so far. ] keep writing. |
 lara-is-my-rolemodel 6/27/04 . chapter 1 That was cool! u must keep going |
 argentiumlupus 6/27/04 . chapter 1this is a review to incite you to review. i crave reviews. give me reviews or i wont write anymore forever not that anyone cares. |