Wow... That was an amazing story. Really awesome. Teenage life can be like that, you put it in a good perspective.

wHAT HAPPENED ?
YOU STOPPED ! You're not writing a sequal?
You should write more, it's hard to find stories relating to the world and i WANT TO know what happens to yolie and ken!

THAT WAS GOOD KEEP ON GOING

I like this alot!can't find many fics these days that stay focused on the characters and don't drift off,I'd like to see this continue,and i'll be reading more of your work.
Mr. Big Fish

I need ur help! Do you want me to continue my story? Suggestions are welcome!

Um... Oddness... You had a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but nothing huge, and I only noticed them in the begining. ...This is...interesting. Cody is acting very much different. So was TK, for that matter. But I suppose people change over time, huh? It stills seems natural though, which is a great accomplishment. Well, that's about it. I look forward to seeing how this all turns out.

wow- that was kinda depressing...but don't leave it off at the good part! PLEASE CONTINUE! and my god can davis get anymore dim?

hey! i really liked this story! the ending was really powerful, and I liked the way you conveyed all the emotions circling about throughout the story. Really good,but maybe you should do a sequel..anyway, keep up the good work! this is going on my favorite stories list!

August G