Reviews for Black and white: Evil vs Evil

WedgePalmer 2008-07-07 ch 7,	abuseI like the Nuke miracle, and there's been a definate improvement in your character personalities and emotions. I love your story and I really want you to finish this! PLEASE!
WedgePalmer 2008-07-07 ch 5,	abusePoor Amon... I love your story and I love the character personality of your Paragon! Keep up the good work! Please finish this up! Just one or two more chapters to go!
catnipp 2005-08-12 ch 6,	abuseAwesome! i can't wait. wtite more soon.
ForgottenHamster 2004-11-08 ch 5,	abusedesciption of your creature and your self would be very nice the story is good and you have placed some well made dialogue but there are empty holes -like add some personality to your creature and your self -maybe put some better discription on the creatures of you and your enemy -try to give a better picture of wat the land looks like but i like the way you made the story and adding in amon like that was a very good idea so keep it up
ForgottenHamster 2004-11-08 ch 2,	abusei like black and white as well and i apreciate how you gave nemesis an actual body but your story seems to be missing out on some actual emotion. your g-d needs to have more personality then you actaully put down being evil is the best
The Typhoon 2004-06-28 ch 1,	abuseReally Really short, but still pretty good.