I cannot believe you just left us hanging without an explanation of why the story has ended. It was good so far, yet you left it unfinished. I am sadden to see good stories abandoned.

Ok that was definitly interesting. Please don´t abandon this story.

Brilliant

Are you going to update? I hope so this is great.

Has this been abandoned? Please say no. This is an interesting twist on Severitus, and I would very much like to see more.

Whoa thats like real cool and yet Im real creeped out. But in a good way. Your story is awesome from what I read. Im like gonna real put you on Story Alert man 'cause your story rocks hard. Keep writin' and I'll keep reviewin'. So like chill and peace Dawg.

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MORE MORE MORE! I WANT MORE NOW PLEASE ITS SOO GOOD I LOVE IT MORE!

i've just read the first 3 chapters, and i am enjoying this story very much. i see that you haven't updated in a while...i do hope you will continue with this story...it's too good to be abandoned. update soon please!

great job. I was just in Italy and so far your descriptions are very accurate. keep up the good work.

Hello. I like the story. I just foumd it resently. I do hope you choose to continue it.

I really, really like this story. You have a wonderful start and I really wish that you would continue. I like that they end up in Rome and have that talk with the priest in the Sistine Chapel. Excellent job.

Cheers!
Julie

Hiyas, I couldn't find your e-mail so I had to send this in a review. Sorry.

I just opened an archive called Potions and Snitches which is about Snape and Harry mentor fics and father/son fics, that sort of thing. I'm sending the link out to all the authors and readers who I think would be interested.

Here you go:

:)

Jan

You have a good story going. You should continue it. I hope you do.

Angie

Oh I do so wish you'd continue this story. You've got me terrible intersted in it. I loved the scene in the chapel, and I also love how you have Hermione and Harry seemingly switch roles. Great job!

-Julie