Wow.

Nice job. I really can't say more.

aw, this is so sweet. l really love your story. Its so sweet and sad, espcially the last one, the write amazingly.

:Cries: NOO! NOW Lupi's gonna get his heart broken Wah!

Of course, as a helpless Remus fan I love any Angst!Remus or InLove! Remus. Just love his... who couldn't for that matter. One point to critism is detail. While I know its hard to put much in a short story I want to find out more of whats going on around the Maurader's, Lily and Kat. I also want to know what Kat so special to Remus besides she looked like she just came shipped from a Cuban summer of suntanning and beach side martinis. Remember this is jolly old england. Tans are not the most common things around. I liked the miniscule Boggart and really like the illusion to POA about the letters. Very orginial. Keep it up!

Tee

Still looks pretty interesting, do write some more. One thing - I hope that Kat's beauty is being exagerated by Lupin's fascination because the whole "goddess beauty" thing gets annoying and is overused, imperfect characters in both looks and personalities are more interesting. I mean you can have a pretty girl but don't make them seem like a goddess of beauty... unless they are of course lol. Uhm but anyway, sorry to ramble. Good story, update soon.

Interesting... *goes to read more*

Wahh! Poor Lupie! We love you!

:Coughs: Anyways, I like it so

far! Yuo should DEFINITALY write

some more! I'll be waiting!

Silvar