hey. thanks for the review, I try to keep those things you said to me in my mind... I write in a hurry, so that's why I got so many mistakes... :) and to tell you the truth, I started to read Naruto some time ago, and I'm little absent-minded... that's why I forgot it was the normal bunshin no jutsu that Naruto had problems with... =) I also have problems with remembering some names... but thanks anyways for the review - please, if you read my story anymore, then please tell me again if there's any mistakes or something... oh, and I read this story, and I think it's good =)

At a loss for words...very interesting, different..um, good! lol. I enjoyed it!

Ok... you skimmed through it for me at skool, but now that I read it... I can say that tis really very good :P Well written, and you've kept all the characters IC. GOOD JOB! XD

I remember in the Yu-Gi-Oh! section there is a fic for the best Mary-Sue's, and each chapter supports the making fun of, and degrading of each and every one of them... Did this chick come from there?

OH MY GAH. (like Jessica Simpson hehe)

OH MY GAH. That was great.

Bah, I hope you don't listen to those people who yell about the evil-ness of Mary Sue's to you. Because.. I don't really think Katrina is one.

That whole thing between Hermione and Katrina was great too. No one really breaks up the trio much. At least in the stuff I read.

SO.

CONTINUE!

This is a parody, right? You wouldn't write a character that is such an over-the-top cliche of a Mary Sue unless the readers are *supposed* to laugh at her? You did a good job of it!

oh. this looks really promising!

Coming of age's at 17!But excellent story!