Reviews for She just couldn't leave

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LilyNightengale 2008-05-10 ch 2, anon.	abuseI'm on Chap 2 and it's excellent so far. The one suggestion I would make for improvement would be to change the cell phone to something that did exist in 1982. I'm Jack's age and I'm afraid small cells you could carry around were still in the back pages of Popular Science Magazine at that point. What we think of as a cellular phone was really a cordless phone with a range of about 20 feet and the size of two bricks lashed together: the height of technology! Lily
Long Live Nelly 2006-08-05 ch 11,	abuseI really like this story, I read it all in one and I love the way Jack and Irina dealt with escaping the KGB. I would really love a sequel. It would be so cool if Jack and Irina were found by the CIA and met Sydney on a mission or something. Please write a sequel!
Irina89 2006-05-04 ch 11,	abuselol, love the ending. Poor Sydney, no one escapes his destiny.
jenny 2006-05-03 ch 11, anon.	abuseI think this is a great story. I think the ending is great, and you could leave it here, but if you do write a sequel I would really love to read it. So Sloane doesn't know that Sydney is Sydney Bristow? That's cool. If you write more on this story or on another story I'd love to read it.
twin*muse 2006-05-03 ch 11,	abuseThat is SO twisted!! I LOVE it! Adore the younger Bristow..er Black kids names too. I'd soo read a sequal if you do one! I'd love to see when/if/how her parents will find out about her job! All she'd have to do is mention her bosses name...I'd love to read it!! tags Author alert button So glad you finished this story! Colly E. of twin*muse
Milady Darkan 2006-05-03 ch 11,	abuseI think the ending is just perfect. Works very well. No need for a sequel. I liked your story very much, and as i've said this ending works beautifuly with the whole plot.
Anonymous 2005-11-08 ch 10, anon.	abusei love it please write more soon
twin*muse 2005-09-18 ch 10,	abuseWow...Jack's fast. You GO lil' Sydney! Even at that age finding whatever she had around her for defence!! Wonder if this plan of his will work. Can't wait for more! Colly E. of twin*muse
texasalias2004 2005-09-18 ch 10, anon.	abuseAwsome chapter. I can't wait to see what happens. Please send me an email when you update. Thank you, Kim texasalias
twin*muse 2005-09-15 ch 9,	abusehhe..hoked! Love this twist of events in the story that is Jack and Irina! Love how you mixed up KGB, Michael's father, Rambaldi and the Sloanes in all this! Can't wait for more! Colly E. of twin*muse
twin*muse 2005-09-15 ch 3,	abuseDirector VAUGHN??!! sorry..just getting through this fic...that just blew me off my chair so I had to comment.. bolts to next chapter Colly E. of twin*muse
Jenny 2005-08-16 ch 9, anon.	abuseIt's a very good story! I particularly liked the first chapter with her dilema over whether to stay or go. Thanks for some good reading! :) PLEASE REMEMBER WHEN YOU'RE ASKING PEOPLE TO REVIEW that we're only allowed to review each story once! So there could be people that very much want you to carry on each time, but are unable to post an encouraging review , as they've already reviewed! Hope that made sense! And well done again on the story!
Kea 2005-07-23 ch 9, anon.	abuselove that Katherine Grey-Bell =KGB. Great fic. Keep it up.
Agent Pheonix 2005-07-17 ch 9,	abuseI can't wait for the next chapter! Update ASAP
NghtStlkr64 2005-06-21 ch 9, anon.	abuseThis is an awesome story. Please don't rush the ending just to end the story. And please continue soon!!

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