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Pan vs Boxer Boy 125
2005-10-22
ch 2,
abuseLol. That was funny! I like it. Please let there be more. Laters!
Slade2.0
2005-10-03
ch 2,
abuseBwahahahaha that was funny
cassi.hiruru
2005-09-27
ch 2,
abusewow.. that was great... *adds to favorites list frantically*
Lawr
2005-09-24
ch 2, anon.
abuseThat was...weird. But then again, it wouldn't be Exsel saga if it wasn't... ;-)
onewingedangel73187
2005-09-15
ch 1,
abuseyou are my god!
Ethnic-Renegade
2005-04-20
ch 2,
abuseah no no no no no! that ending is so cliche` thats so old! like 30's
foxygirlchan
2005-03-14
ch 2,
abuseHAHAHAHAHAMEOW! Excel thinking that?! Meow! meow hahaha I was thinking wtf are they doing that in the headquarters?! well then good job I gotta go meow!
DeepThoughtsX
2005-03-02
ch 2,
abuseNice! Short, but definitely deserves a good thumbs up!
Ian Reid
2005-01-23
ch 2,
abuseApparently, the first chapter was a complete disaterpiece if I may say so myself. Of course, I can't say the same for the second chapter either.

Excel contemplating murder?

You have to do it with style. Not some hack-job like you did here. Find your writing style first, the style that appeals to you most, and then improve your grammar, spelling, punctuation, and go on from there. Best to take a break while you have the chance, kid. Otherwise you're gonna be murdered in your sleep.

Trust me on this. Most authors (Fangirls primarily) can't compete with other authors.
The Silent Dark Jackal
2005-01-07
ch 2,
abuseOMG LOL LOL LOL
that was the funniest/ erratic Excel Saga Fanfic I have ever read!... please tell me there is another chapter...*whines*
kasie
2004-11-09
ch 2, anon.
abuse(pouts)poor excel it was only a dream.it was realy good.
Zankoku na Tenshi Cruel Ang...
2004-10-18
ch 2,
abuseis there more?
darkpyroangel06
2004-07-10
ch 2, anon.
abuseThat was so wrong it's funny! I love Excel Saga and my nickname is Hyatt because I act just like her. My two friends are Menchii and Excel. I'll have to give your story to Excel. I think she'll love it. I know I did! You're a great writer!
ConfusedExcel
2004-07-02
ch 1,
abuseThis is good. LOL! Poor Excel.
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