Decidedly entertaining; delightful, insightful.

Mwuahahaha...that was great fun. XD I love your Link.

ah, i never get tired of reading this. =]

Link's so cool!^^
Steelwater Raven is hilarious
Rohn is...well I just love his character!

I thought that was a great (and incredibly insane) story. Very humorous, adventurous, and slightly romantic (just like The Apprentice). I noticed that Link has almost a Captain Jack Sparrow attitude (or maybe just the same habits: "Love" and "Mate", for example). I really enjoyed the somewhat parody of Star Wars, that just made the chapter extra funny. I hope you will keep writing after these four stories you have on here. You are a really talented author. Anyway on to "The War of the Fairies).

Good story so far. I get the feeling that Link is a little...slow...on the uptake (maybe even stupid, if you get my meaning). I don't know who to root for: Zelda or Link. I want to believe that something is not right with Link's behavior. He sounds a little...staged? I don't know a word to describe it, but he seems like he's being used as a puppet for someone else's devices. That's my feeling.

OMG! I'm a couple years late into reading this but I am so happy I found it! I love the Aussie Accent ya strapped Link with.

I havent read something as good as this in so long I forgot there was good stuff on this site! I could seriously go on forever on how good this is but I dont want to sound like suck up kinda guy ya know? it seriously deserves 2 page essay on its greatness though! Its just Damn Brilliant!

ive read this to, and its also good.

steelwater raven makes me laugh in this chapter every time

yay read this for the second time over. nothing really notable to say about it, as my head is quite empty from oversleeping. lovely work though. ^_^

I've spent three days reading this fic, and I'm glad I did ^^
Great, great fic!

And, Link reminds me of Jack Sparrow :3

First off, I just found your story and read it all in one sitting. Bloody brillant. Monty Python meets Zelda...I like. Plus, the british accents make sense.

At first, I asumed that Link was a parody on Jack Sparrow, but as I read on, I realized he was merely in the same vein: Link is a Trickster, one of the most basic of charecter types, yet the least used most times. And Link was truly like the original tricksters: Gods that descend, do their work, then leave the mortals.

Zelda, in the end, I believe, was like the classic mortal becoming a god. As time moves on, she becomes like a Mini Trickster, using her own wits to get what she wants.

Once again, great great read

Wow! I laughed my ** off throughout the whole story! The little nuggets of wisdom coming from the "Shadow Lord" are quite inspiring. This is one of the best-written stories I've ever read.

I really liked this story! Very lighthearted indeed, but entertaining and enjoyable. I absolutely LOVED the part when Link and Raenie insulted the spinster - that was so hiliarious, it had me laughing for a while. Off to the sequel soon!

Decent enough story. I think a huge downside to it though was the dialogue. Making everyone talk like a dopey brit took away from the seriousness of what was otherwise a very good story. You should have done the dialogue like you did in The Apprentice.