ouch.

Aww. *sniffs* This is lovely, it really is. I know it's not quite the right word for a piece where someone dies, but you know what I mean. I like it.

this is sad. It's a good write though, and a good idea. keep it up

Oh, wow. This was brilliant, I really really love it. Thank you.

Just one thing, though - I think Dementors usually has a capital. But this would be wonderful even if it had no capitals whatsoever.

Sorry for raving. :)

Wah. I want Remus to keep at least his happy memories. I want him to be able to see Padfoot again. Now I'm all misty eyed. That's a good thing, by the way. ;)

and that night as they held each other, Sirius had whispered "no one's ever expected me to protect them before"

Aww! There is a hopeless romantic doing hopeless "aww"-ing right now. You captured the Sirius who rocks my world right there... :D

NO! Why'd he have to DIE? I HATE JKR FOR THAT! *sniff* Wah!

I've read this before, and loved it, but I'm doing all the things I should have done but haven't yet tonight, or trying to, and reviewing this is on the list.

Anyway, I would leave some kind of coherent exaulting review but, dammit, I re-read it and you've killed me again.

I loves this very very much. And yes, that's sort of all I can say. It's really touching, and really sweet, in a sad kind of way. *sniffles*

*gasp* OMG, heart-breaking. In a good way, of course. You got a nice "aww..." Out of me at the end there. All his happy memories are gone. Now all I have to do is hold onto my denial of his deatha little longer.

*Cries* So simple, and yet so sad. I wish I could say something enlightening, critical or even just coherent, but I can't.

This is completely heart-wrenching :( Ironically, it fits into PoA canon very well - I think it's Hermione who says Lupin shoots 'something' out of his wand rather than a distinct shape. It's touching and lovely and I feel horribly sorry for poor Remus.

Short and very very sad. But really good!

That's really sad, but I like it.

*is too busy sobbing to be able to write a review*

Very sweet, short and succint. Apposite portrayal of Lupin in agony. I like the way you flourish around with prose.