definitely not the crush i was expecting... well-written though.

You know, reading this made me recall that I could swear there WAS a line where Rukia said something about liking both Kaien and his wife. So this well-written piece could easily be squeezed into canon offstage somewhere.
Though now I find myself wanting to read Kaien/Rukia/Miyako threesomes and I'm pretty sure there aren't any, so... Curses, I guess.

i'm a little confused

Very nice. Good quality work. Can't find that much now. I particularly enjoyed it, everything fit together very well and the character's were well protrayed. Kudos.

P.S. It seems that all of the decently written work never get the attention they deserve. *sighs* It's so disappointing.

Wow, you wrote this two years ago and only got two reviews. Sorry man. anyway, I was looking for Rukia fan fics and stumbled on yours. So without further ado:

Its a nice story. I think most people don't write about Rukia and Ichigo because their personality is like Ranma and Akane, never admitting their true feelings. But this fic is a nice break from the angst type I've been reading lately. Also a first for writing about Miyako, Shiba's wife.

hope you have more stories other than this. I'll search for more.

hey...great story...i like it!! woot-hoot! ^^

Omg... I'm appalled that this hasn't gotten a review yet! >< I loved this little snippet! However, the end of this thing doesn't really seem to end so maybe that's why? ^^ Well, keep writing!! Though, you may want to make this seem more complete.