*strangles Peter* DIE YOU &*$%@% RAT! Hehe ... Ahem ... Nice job :)

It is nice to hear a different pont of view.

No where does it specifically say that Peter was in Gryfindor.

Well written, very descriptive. I enjoyed it. You've done a lovely job with Pettigrew's tale, and you deserve acknowledgment. Keep up the wonderful work! )

This was such an excellent charictarisation (sp?. You portrayed Peter's jealousy, greed, and cowardice perfectly. I hate Peter Pettigrew. I do. But somehow, I find him immensely fascinating. What could have compelled him to betray his best friends like that? You gave an excellent insight into the matter.

Poor Petee! ;_; Somehow your characterisation of him makes sense, and while I feel like I hate him, I also feel sorry for him. He's a lot more 3-dimensional in this fic, too. Kudos! _

Unique insight into Peter, with great detail about his feelings. I especially liked the description of how frightening and disappointing it was to be such a small animal. His opinion of Remus was really interesting. Great job!

Great story! It's inspired me to write my own about how Peter felt.

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Wow, an excellent story! I really love your POV. I know some people wouldn't get the whole twisted-ness of it, but I think it really works! Very VERY good job!

that was so stupid James Potter is a pureblood you nitwit

get the facts stupid

VERY VERY GOOD STORY! I hope you weren't trying to make Peter good, thoe...he's just worse than before. ::sweatdrop::

i don't imagine things that way but it was extremly well written. personally it makes my stomach do flips to imagine anyone to be so twisted and i really don't imagine sirius remus and james that way, but as for the story itself it was scary, haunting and completly excellent!

i don't imagine things that way but it was extremly well written. personally it makes my stomach do flips to imagine anyone to be so twisted and i really don't imagine sirius remus and james that way, but as for the story itself it was scary, haunting and completly excellent!

wow.. that was good. poor Peter!

Oh, very nice. This captures a lot of the pettiness, jealousy, greed, and ambition of Pettigrew. It's nicely done; I just went to a workshop today on switching between the past and present, and you've done an admirable job. Thank you for not labelling the years or putting in a "Now we're time-warping to their fifth year"; those are the rip-offs to end all rip-offs. I have to question, however, the timing when it says: "He had his own slogan now, that he’d whisper to himself every time the Potter-worshipers chanted 'No PIG': 'One Dead, One in Azkaban.'" If this is school-time Peter talking, there's no way he could know that James would be dead and Black in Azkaban. If it's post-MWPP tragedy, then why are the Potter-worshipers chanting "No PIG"? You'd think they'd have something better by now, like "Remember the Potters!" or "Cheers! Voldie's a *stiff*, man!" [grins] Oh, yeah - any thoughts on why Peter ended up in Gryffindor to begin with? He seems caught somewhere between Hufflepuff and Slytherin, doused in cowardice, whininess, and enough ambition to keep Malfoy going for a month, not to mention that he sure knows how to look out for number one. Does it actually *say* in the books that he was Gryffindor? Anyway, keep writing, and may the wind be at your back.