wow...thats good... I loved it! Keep it up! You rock!

Bardock or Vegeta watching him hell/heaven... IMO

I liked that - I'm not sure why, which is annoying, because I can't tell you. I guess my favourite line was the one "even though you may not want to", because throughout the entire fight with Furiza, Goku kept trying to stop the battle, to get Furiza to change his ways peacefully.

...Ahem. And to Meriadoc from Hobbiton: It's actually spelled Gokuu. Read the Japanese; you'll see there are two "u"'s. "Goku" is the American spelling, and generally more widespread, but "Gokuu" is correct.

-Sorry about the ranting, Quatrina, but I just had to add the last bit. I like the Japanese spelling better, but I'm too used to the American to change now!

well, I'd give it a 8 or 9 its way better than your other poems, don't know if its cuz I'm more into DBZ than Gundam but hey good work keep working friend

ooooooh it make the hairs on the back of my neck stand up! _

Great! :) I liked it! Where do you get your inspiration? Ahh... I wish my poetry was that good.

i liked it. poems always calm me down. especially good ones like this.

coolio! _

Yay! Good poem! I can never do rhymes...

That was really good!

getting better as you go. I like it, I like it.

Good fic, but U SPELLED GOKU WRONG! G-O-K-U, k? GOKU! Good story though!

This end is so sweet! I liked it! Let me guess, it's Gohan POV, isn't it? Anyway, very sweet one!