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| Alorkin 2008-01-10 ch 1,  | abuseNicely done with a very frightening end! It brings back that old idea: What if everything we know is just the dreams of another? Alorkin |
| t-me 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseYou’re good at this dark and twisted stuff. |
| mike 2006-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abusesf |
| madbrad 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abuseOh. My. Goodness. Wow. A double-whammy. In one paragraph I'm shocked that Harry has killed Dumbledore, to be finally free of his meddling ... and I stop to make sure I'm reading it right, and re-read that paragraph ... Okay, wow, moving on ... and BANG! Hit between the eyes again. Very clever. I'm currently reading your Curse of Durand story - I think I'll print it out so I can devour it in one proper reading session, sitting in the recliner, rather than crouched over a keyboard - and thought I'd see what else you've written (I was hoping a sequel to Durand might already be up :-( ). Excellent little story here - very chilling. My goodness, just thought of a third whammy ... I wonder if Harry was in Tom's body ... when Hermione (viciously) burnt it? Jeeze, I love this fan fiction stuff. Thank you for writing such a wonderful little story! |
| Haleydoll 2005-02-24 ch 1, anon. | abuse... now thats a scary thought |
| Cor-chan 2004-11-29 ch 1, | abuse...I honestly can't tell if Voldie turned good or if he's plotting evilly in Harry's body. Very deft usage of tone, word choice, and perspective. I had to reread it a couple times to totally analyze it, and it works. The whole thing works, from whichever standpoint you take... |
| futago>akuma-tenshi01 2004-10-20 ch 1, | abuseThat is so creepy...*shudders* |
| ,"", 2004-10-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice and twisty. Write more stories please. |
| Emily 2004-10-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou really know how to write to punch the reader in the gut with those last few lines. Very Orwellian in a way. I love your stories. |
| dshael 2004-08-09 ch 1, | abuseAck. Whoa. Wow. ...very impressive. |
| Em.x 2004-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting twist...i never saw it coming. |
| Noria 2004-07-14 ch 1, | abuseI've read the story twice now and one has to, to get the full impact of what it is about. I like double-features and this one's just brilliant (as all your HP stories are). The idea, the way you solve the final battle is shocking but very logical, too. And the way you make the reader believe that Harry has really won is taunting. You hide your true intentions as does Voldemort in this story and still everything fits every time one reads the story. Really well done. I hope you keep writing more HP stories (I dare not read the West Wing stories since I don't know the show at all). Adelandeyo Noria |
| a4o 2004-07-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is simply brilliant ! That's the best written fic I've read in a very long time. I especially love you're description of the relationship between Riddle and Dumbledore. It highlights the similarities between Hary and Tom even better than what was explicitly said in the original books. I hope you'll write other fics in the HP universe, as you seem to have a very good grasp on the characters. |
| npetrenko 2004-06-29 ch 1, | abusePretty good. |