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Reviews For: Unexpected Allies Part III: Trial of the Century - Reviews: Page 1 of 16

MittknightDr
2008-07-16
ch 22,
abuseAW!

That's so cute, you should do a sequel for us, please...

-puppy dog pout-
Brealene
2008-06-24
ch 22,
abuseaw! o love these! this is prabally the best i have ever read! i mean realy! im so glad that u finished it a lot of good fics arent finished cries! but im glad that u did and congrats and doing such a great job! this is one i will most definally read agian!
Megan Floyd
2008-06-21
ch 17, anon.
abuseHi, I really love your stories, I believe you have an amazing talent. I think that what your gramee meant by "a graceful enemy is a sight to behold, and a deadly one at that" is that, to see someone fight with such grace, such poise would turn a fight almost into a dance, where your enemy would twirl around you, light on their feet and nearly impossible to hit. To couple that with such precision would make their attacks deadly because they would never miss, never stumble, never fail.

But that's just what I think.
Shade
2008-06-01
ch 22, anon.
abuseThe whole trilogy was one of the best I've ever read and I couldn't stop reading! Keep it up!
Later
-Gothic-Rainbow-
2008-05-10
ch 22,
abuse*squeals* OMG this was such a wonderful story! The ending was beautiful and well written, with Sesshomaru still in character throughout! One of my faves! Keep writing!!
lillianRL20
2008-03-15
ch 22, anon.
abuseum is the story over because on the reveiw thing it does not say that it ts complete oh and love your story i loved the plot to it i think im going to put you as one of my favorite writers
Gnos fo Ytinrete
2008-03-09
ch 22,
abuseAw. Good job. So sweet. ^_^ Heh. Who'dda thought that her gramps was Narasa. Mm. Good job. This story has a different feel than your Cross of Blades and Second Chance. You moved things along faster. Ah, the 'training' they received in the prequel was...Amusing. I don't like how they make her a damsel in the original and I like how you always make her stronger somehow. You seem to like making her out to be anything BUT human *smirk*. I can understand why though. ^_^ Again, good job.
I was able to sense your dislike of Kikyou in the Cross of Blades one, but one can feel it all the more in this one.
Most of the IY stories I've read so far are really good and interesting, I wonder why that is...I also have no idea how I came across your story...I was pretty sure I was searching for something else, but I'm glad I found you and your stories.^_^ Mm. I love it when the couple gets back together. So happy. ^_^
Seshi's so sweet at the end. btw. Is this story complete yet? You put "Fin" at the end, but didn't put it's status to "complete", which you normally do, so I was just wondering if I should keep an eye on this story.

Cya 'round.
Liliana
addicted2reviews
2008-02-14
ch 22,
abuseaw cute
beyond the darkness
2008-02-10
ch 22,
abuseWONDERFUL!
i much enjoyed reading your trilogy and much thanks for a good ending :)
keep up the adventerous writing...
sayuri-girl
2008-02-08
ch 22,
abusenice ... very nice ... I loved this third part also

I liked the way Kagome just challenged the council when Sesshoumaru was acused of treason ;) ... that was a neat feature ... and the scene with Kagome killing Naraku ... a very unique way of killing him by kissing him ... that was gross

chapter 17, 'A Blast from the Past', just brought tears to my eyes ... it was a very touching scene with Kagome looking at the recorded Sesshoumaru talking about Rin's death and how he was feeling alone

|~sayuri~|
Obsequious101
2008-02-03
ch 22,
abuseaw! i LOVE this story so much! Although i have to admit that i havent read the first Part becasue i started from the second one...but o well! Great writing btw!
Raina Darlig
2008-01-17
ch 17,
abuseI cried when I read this
sakimasu
2007-12-28
ch 1,
abuseit's greate!i never get tired of reading it.frome my point of vew this is you're best fic.ja ne!:)
FlyAwaytotheMoonAbove
2007-12-21
ch 17,
abusei understand--a little. (from stage) Adea: SHE WILL KILL YOU WHEN SHE FINDS OUT! (rolls eyes) okay, wow this is hard to explain...hm...if an enemy is graceful, watch out. if you get transfixed on the enemy's movements, they become deadly to you. yeah... (crash echoes from stage) Uh-oh...i need a leash...(sighs)
Sacred Miko Hime
2007-11-13
ch 11,
abuseI love this story! I've got it saved so I can read it anytime. Bu the way, I've got a picture of Kagome that I drew from this story for you. It's on deviantart.

I hope you like it.
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