OMG! That was brilliant. Extremely awesome!

You are an awesome writer. i hope you continue writing fan fics or professionally since you draw your reader into the story and trap them until the last word. I read UA part 1, 2, and 3 today (started at noon) and its almost seven now (so what does that tell you about your writing abilities). i've never been so absorbed by a fan fic before. i am actually planning to read your other stories asap after i finish UA3.

i think im goi*g to hurt u. u are *o lo*ger posti*g for this story, i'll *ever k*ow what happe*ed. sobs... u could at least tell me the plot. ma*... by the way the star equals n... the butto* barely works. sorry.

I love your story, it's even better than the second.

what, no lemon?

Hah! You wait til the children are born! I'm sure he'll be feeling like he was in hell then! Nah he'll still love them! LOL, awesome fanfiction, I really enjoyed viewing it!
Jazu chan xoxo /'.'\

Okay I so had to review on this chapter! LOL, I loved it and I laugh every time I imagine inuyasha's face as Sesshy said Kagome said she loved sesshy kun! LOL, now that was hilarious, shall review more later!
Jazu chan xoxo /'.'\

great story. If it's complete, you need to put it complete. Maybe the child can be a girl & be named Rin after young Rin. Where's Jaken? or eventually Kags & Sess can have 4 kids. 2 sets of twins. The first set a male & female- Miroku & Sango. The 2nd set, also male & female- Kohaku & Rin. They can even look just like their past selves & be their reincarnations.- snickers-

I was re-reading this series (It's one of my favs) and happened to notice that this one wasn't marked as complete in the heading...
It is finished though right?

aww. this was a good story. i actually read the all three parts. i love it. keep up the good work. is there gonna be a fourth part??

hey if the story is ended then why isnt it labeled 'complete' out in the summary? :o that nearly threw me off from reading it! oh well, im glad i did :3 yay!

YAAY! violent pacifist happy! Your story is the mad wizard! (excuse my strange language) I loved the ending and basically the whole story. Well I love all your writing.. ANYWAY i could sound corny and say keep up the good work or i could be coolio and say keep writing awesome shtuff, yo! i'm going to stick with the second one XD

i loved them all

absolutely amazing :) a work of art! i think it should be turned into a AU movie!! plz keep writing!!

Hey, I think I'm gonna stop reading now.

It's not that I don't like it, but things are too scattered.

One minute, he is confessing he loves her and has no problem admitting it to himself. I understand why he isn't telling Inuyasha and co, because he is stubborn and doesn't want them to know, but now his thoughts are changing back to "I don't love her" Its too confusing how he keeps changing his mind.

Oh, I forgot to review the second too. It didn't make sense to me that in the first Unexpected Allies, Sesshoumaru travelled a week away on human foot in one day, yet he couldn't catch up to her or make it to her quicker when she was only a few days away.

I do like your story, I suppose I'm confused about things what are putting me off it. But keep up the good work for your reviewers and readers...