This is a good piece of writing.

That was amazing. I love all the wording about it and how true it really is. Great job!
>>BrOoKe

I noticed you review. And as you asked felt the need to explain myself. Well I actually have removed several others from that group. I have submitted a request for another catagory for my poetry. I merely put what i had there for a friend and for lack of a better place. But thank you for the review and the question.

A word of advice Please RETIRE and don't become a writer

O wow! I liked this alot!! :-)! I liked ur style, the technquie... basically WoW!

wow, that was really good! i really loved it! i hope you make more soon, because i was really getting into it!