Oh! I should not have read this before I sleep!

How cute.. it seems erik may be pulling a romeo juliet at the end 0_0

whoa now that was a good story! erik is like the best man ever. it's an interesting philosophy as to whether the ability to see ghosts is a brain disfunction or just a closed mind. very well written. very well written indeed.

this was the most vivid thing i've ever read in my life. i don't know whether to complement you or throw up.

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HI.
I LIKE YOU.
A LOT.

For seriously. I just lost several hours of sleep reading this, and I hope I can pass my tests tomorrow with only this on my mind.

Though I can't say I was content with the characterization and the repetetiveness...I read it. It was addictive.


Makes me want to re-edit all of my other Phantom fics.

Oh Gods. Am I in the presence of the Queen (King?) of Morbidity? Should I bow? Ah man, that is such a sad ending... I can picture it... wow. Nightmares.

This is really, really good... I should be in bed right now but I'm stuck here running through this. You handle all of the characters with such sensitivity- they're all perfectly in character, and the descriptions are like ghosting touches that are careful not to come down too heavily while giving maximum visual output. It's haunting. Christine in her dreams, out of her dreams, daydreaming and drifting off on strange things.. I just love how it's written.

dude...very deep, very scary. Why must erik suffer so? but it's refreshing to see something that isn't just him rolling in the hay with some random hottie. I like this alot...actually, i think you must be the best author ever...on fanfiction, I mean. Wow...I'm sort of wowed so, yeah. I hope I don't get a tumor! That would NOT be cool. random, I know, but hey! what can you do?

With everlasting respect and a wee bit of envy,

TH

I cannot express how absolutely marvelous that story was. Everything was formulated perfectly, the use of foreshadowing was absolute, and however frustrating and sad the ending was, this has to be one of the best stories I've read. Brava, yet argh!

Amazing. Perfectly haunting and brilliantly written. It must have taken you forever!!

This is brilliantly written, but alas, it is late, and my eyes can only take so much of the computer. This is going on my favourites, and I shall finish this tomorrow!

cheers,

Caroline Butler

Oh, wow. Characters were incredible, story was crafted amazingly. Thrilling. Erik-the-mad-scientist scene was quite vivid, as was the last. I did NOT see the ending coming! All this time I was wondering why she became so obsessed over the little girl, and all the clues were there, but I only noticed them once I had finished. The last scene was very emotional. Erik was done really, really well. His last line was creepy: 'I do not want you any less'. Very believable conclusion, and the last paragraph wrapped it up in the most wonderful way I could have imagined.

wonderful, simply wonderful: I love your idea of an almost mentally sane Erik and a schizophrenic Christine - that's exactly what I was always supposed Christine to be ;-). and relating to the storyline: your "elainie" is one of those rare fictions in this fan-dome which deserves to be called a real tragedy.
Thank your for the story and your well developed characters!
eml

Like wow ima like speechless! That was wounderful!
i really dont know waht else to say! bravo!

Well done. I'm fond of questionable-sanity-Christine portrayals; this is excellent, particularly in the careful treading of the line between actual ghost story and psychological malfunction. The Angel of Death... and all the echoes between real and surreal and dream.

If the story has a flaw, to my mind, it's simply that this Erik is too composed; too clinical, perhaps. But that's a personal preference, and as it stands, his distance serves to reinforce the mental derangement that Christine experiences.