deep...very deep and angsty (I think that's the word).

Wow, this is a touching poem. I like it a lot. It really portrays thoughts and feelings. Poor Link.

Woooooooooow...(stares at the screen with wide eyes.)

This is GREAT! I LOVE it! Keep writing!

Wow! Very powerful poem. _ It goes really well with 'The Legend of A aka' blaring in the background. Seriously, it does! (From Princess Mononoke). I only have one thing to say, and this is to Link: Life goes on. -_- And sometimes, the only way to get rid of evil is by physically destroying it. You just have to be sure of what you're fighting for. -_- Which, in the real world, full of lies, crooked politics, and hate, is hard. And the people you're fighting for don't even care, half the time. They just forget about you, and leave you all alone to yourself after you've saved their hides a thousand times. But, remember, there are people out there who care, or peolpe who haven't been born yet, who'll care. _ No one ever said the things a hero does is always righteous and valliant. But a hero's gotta do what a hero's gotta do. That's what makes them heros. -Oh gosh, here I go, ranting about something, and TALKING TO A NON-EXISTING PERSON! _ Oh well. I'm not insane. Just demented, and always happy (except for when I read or watch stuff, like all of your fanfiction, which, by the way, totally rocks, and whenever I see movies like Braveheart, Saving Private Ryan, the Patriot, umm...and anything else like that.)

Very sad. I like it a lot! Keep writing! Ja ne!

That was - well I was going to say nice, but I don't think that really fits your poem, hmmm, it was interesting.

But poor Link! He was so confused, you did a good job of showing it.

Ooh! REALLY good! Okay, I know this is a Zelda fic, but it kinda reminded me of EE. Great job! *Adds to favorites*

Sorry, but I must point out that you misspelled species _;; There are a couple typos too, that you might want to look at. Well, anyhoo, onto the poem (is this the beginning of a trend, PikaCheeka?) _ I like the type of poem you wrote; it doesn't matter that there's no ryhme; it makes a nice free verse/monologue. I like the twisted angsty thought here; the questioning of what is good and what is evil. Tee hee hee... I love messing around with that moral question in my writing too (wait til you see how I drive Remus insane in Sin of Lycaos... _) And you pointed out some very insightful concepts too, like the fact that most people don't want to stand up for themselves and so the person who does feels the pressure from the people. The term you used - "nobody's hero" - I thought was great too. "Am I nobody's hero..?" Gawd, I love that quote! _

I like this, a lot! Funny, I've just gotten back into my Zelda game... but it's the one for SNES, not one of the newer ones... I forget what it's called. I'm working on beating it for the fiftieth time. Profound poem, though... I've had those thoughts before, too. What IS evil and what IS good? It's frikkin scary. Good job!