nice story so fr, my only complaint is that is has not been updated recently. I am also glad that it dosent seem to be an akane pairing, i personally dont like Ranma akanes pairins lol

Great work, hope this gets continued.

Great chapter and story so fair pleases continue the story soon.

i like the fic i really do but when are you going to update it again and why did mara not show herself to Ranma earlier? and what will hilds reaction be to the merge of Ranma and Urd? well i would appreciate it if you could respond to this thanks.

this is probably the best ive seen so far in a ranma/urd fic. i cant wait for an update, tho i think the pairing should be ranma/nabiki/mara. entertaining laughs should happen with that pairing.

yikes
well its a good story please
add more if you can or want to.

I just finish reading chapters 1-4 and I LOVE THEM ALL (*x5) I hope more coming soon.

Um, well, as this is probably the only chapter I haven't reveiwed, I have to put thos here, heh. I really like this fic and I am hoping for some continuation on it soon. Also, I pitty Akane at the moment, poor girl had to get Mara angrya at her, not that she didn't do anything to deserve it, but still, poor girl. And this just accured to me, does Hild know about this? I mean she is/was Urd's mother, and thus is a second mother along with Nodoka to this new Ranma. So, does she know, and if so, what is her reaction to this mess that her daughter has found herself in? And if she doesn't know, well when she does find out about this feasco, what will she do first? It seems that Akane bashing is now in seson. Poor, poor Akane. Heh. So, please, put Hild into this story sometime soon, for I can't wait to see what she will do and how she will do it.

Well, thanks for writing this in the first place and good bye for now. I hope to hear from you soon though!

I remember reading a fic quite some time ago where Ranma-chan became a god and Tatiwaki became a demon to balance her in the doublet system... When Mara said "Get away from my Ranma-sama" I couldn't help thinking she'd assimilated with Kodachi. Probably something to do with the doublet system...

Interesting rewrite, I'd been avoiding reading it since I'd had issues with Ranma's easy forgiveness of Akane and the fact he stayed with her in the original. His reactions in this one seems more realistic.

One thing I notice in this that really bugged me though; you constantly used the word vile when you should have used vial.

Vile: a: morally despicable or abhorrent. b: physically repulsive.

Vial: a small closed or closable vessel especially for liquids

Hope to see more of this story soon!

LOL please update!

cool story! i like ranma/mara pairings! UPDATE!

Wow, thanks for finally getting this out. Um, that didn't sound too nice did it? Uh, ah well.

But really, thank you for writing this, and for pleasing your fans with an update.

And Mara (You use the english translated name eh?) having a crush on Ranma? I can see that. Ohh, Akane is in TROUBLE! I hope that Ranma can protect her, somewhat that is.

Well, here's hoping for more on this, thank you for ever writing this, bye for now.

This story is good so far. I would advise posting it under the 'Ranma' catagory instead of the 'Anime X-over' section.

I am a little confuse on the Marla-Urd/Ranma reunion though. I thought Ranma was in male form when they met up, but Marla was thinking it was Urd? I'll go back and re-read it later, but I think you should too (last scene).