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| The YaoiYuri Hater 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abuseHmm, it's kinda hard to see Gendou saying all this to EVA-01/ Yui. It was also a little too brief for my liking. |
| Crimson Sun 2003-03-05 ch 1, | abuseThe pattern is perfect. This seems like no accident. |
| diskincluded 2001-04-15 ch 1, | abusewhoa, this is great stuff! not too long, (i lose interest with long poetry) and easy to read. Although you say Gendo's piece was mostly an accident, I still don't get how it can be an accident at all. I'd say it fits right in with how I see his character. |
| FyireChildesDream 2001-02-04 ch 1, | abuseWOW thanks for even looking @ mine!!!! |
| Pokemon 2001-01-31 ch 1, | abuseHELLO! I'M BACK WITH MORE BASHING TO THE AUTHOR EVERYONE HATES: WORLDMAGE!! HOW YA' DOIN' YOU OVERLY GRAMMATICAL ANNOYING BASTARD? YOU KNOW WHAT? I DIDN'T READ THIS FIC! I ONLY SKIPPED IT SO I COULD FLAME THE LIVING SH*IT OUT OF YOU! SO WORLDMAGE, ANY GRAMMATICAL ERRORS YET? WOW...I DON'T CARE! YOU'RE AN INCREDIBLY GAY FREAK OF NATURE AND YOUR STORIES ARE HORRIBLE ANYWAYS! DO YOU HAVE A SENSE OF HUMOR? DO YOU HAVE ANY LIFE BESIDES SITTING ON YOUR A$$ THINKING OF WAYS TO ANNOY EVERY WRITER YOU REVIEW? HMMM....MUST SUCK BEING YOU! |
| Derek Zischke 2001-01-28 ch 1, | abuseWell, although I'm usually much better at giving a reason why a story works moreso than a poem does, I thought this had your custom style to it. Nice characterisation of Yui (They bound me well/ In Hell I wait/ With hate I fight). |