Please continue. This is AWESOME! There's no words for this story. That's how good it is. Please Please Please continue. And soon. I need more.

When John is talking can you bold the print. I'm getting a little confused. Although you do say who's talking so I thank you for that. If you don't that's ok. Believe me I will stil read the story.

Hm,wonder why he had visions of killing Ken then?Can't wait for the answer to that.And major kudos for Annie!Sticking by him,good her her.

Ha! The sheriff STILL has nothing.Good,I hate that prick.And what did happen to Ken I wonder?Weird.And now what's goning on with Mort?!

Yay,nice to see you back.Good chapter,but I'm oh so worried what they might do to Mort.Suppose I'll just have to wait and see.And I think Annie's reaction is perfect,considering she IS his best friend,and she DOES have previous experiance with muder.

Good chapter. I like that you made them both wake up at the same time. It's coming along very nicely. Update soon.

Lovely story so far. I like Annie. She is a very cool character, and not a whore like Amy...I hated Amy...she was never that pretty...Oh, well, I was a bit off-subject.

Anywho, I hope you shall update soon, as I am adding this story to my favorites list.

I like.It's nice to just have a slow going,so to speak,chapter with just thoughts in it every so often.Oh oh oh!And I HATE when you have to write essays in school.When they tell you just to write something,I'm fine.But then when they tell you exactly what to do and all that "in conclusion" crap,I hate it!

I can honestly say you are a very good smut writer.Very good stuff you wrote in fact.I loved it.And it is nice to see how characters interact.And nice emotion portraying in this chapter.Great great great.

After reading this chapter I'm reminded of a quote; "Alcohol, the cause of, and solution to, all of life's problems." -Homer Simpson.
It's one of my favorite's even though it was said by a cartoon character. Annie strikes me as the kind of person who will get her answers, no matter what the cost. And being smart, she's going about it by way of acoholic beverages! I love it! I just wonder what kind of drunk Mort is... The slap-happy kind, or the very talkitive kind... Or maybe he's the kind that will start a sentence and then break off in the middle to stare at some crack in the wall. Hmm, either way, I can't wait to find out.
Wow! I thought I paid attention to detail, but after reading your author's note, I found I was sorely mistaken. However I do remember Ken saying something about the rabid fan and I'm really glad that you chose to write about that, espically in a dream, brilliant.

Nice dream sequence.The woman was freaking me out.And once again,gotta love Annie,coming in with alcohol to save the day.

hmm...alright, now I'm intrigued by this new plot. Very good. I like all you've done so far!

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I really like this story. I just got the DVD myself and I really liked the Mort character. Who isn't a little crazy, right? I think that you are staying really true to the character and I love that. I like Annie, as well. She seems to compliment him well, even though he's not exactly in his right mind at the moment. Very good story, though, and I await more.

Good for Annie.Sticking up for a friend in need.Gotta love her.And really loving their relationship.

Nifty O/C...should be interesting to see how Mort reconnects with her. How did she get along w/ Amy, did the marriage change their friendship? Lots of potential here, I look forward to more! (Got a chuckle out of the "Fear & Loathing" reference, good one!)

I reckon it's quite funny how he thinks he honors her by watering the garden and stuff, lol. For some reason I doubt she feels honored.

This is a really good start to a promising story. I look forward to the update.

FalconWing.