Marvellous. A pro-Inuyasha story for once. And not only that, but it's one that actually acknowledges the fact that Osuwari is demeaning.

Well-written sentences and paragraphs. Well-handled subject matter. Wish it wasn't a one-shot, but oh well. :P

(Because I'm obsessed with pro-Inuyasha stories, anti-Rosary/Osuwari stories and others where the rosary and spell are removed :D)

Wow... this is the first fic like this that I've ever read. I liked Inuyasha's language, and I thought that the approach you took to the situation was great. Awesome work with this. It was great!

Yay! Finally somebody showing a little sympathy for Inuyasha. I totally agree with you on this. Good job! :)

i like it, it's cool. it was perfect to me; all the accurate spelling and grammer.

AW! *sniff* okay! I'm good. Because, I read the first two, I read this and I'm so glad I did. You are seriously a talented, talented writer. I hope you continue in that direction. I'll certainly continue to review.

You did a great job with this fic, i loved the way you had Inuyasha explain his responsibility to Kikyou and; how you improved Kagome's and Inuyasha's relationship.

Bravo! Well-spoken! It is about time someone gave a voice to Inuyasha's feelings.

I don't know if to grovel before you, or hug you. I don't have enough words to say that this one-shot was very well written and just made me want to read it a second time. Thank you for the insight on Inuyasha's feelings.

wow nice beginning! keep on writing, im interested in finding out what happens! love the fan fic!

kouga gurl

That story was really good!

how sweet! endearingly sweet! ^_^