Heh, I apologize for how long I took to reveiw. I only got up to chapter 3 before I needed a break. It's good so far. Hopefully, I'll read the rest of your story soon and read the other PSO story you made.

Great job on the chapter! Keep it up! Can't wait for the next one!

Wow! I just started to play PSO but this is a really great story. My chracters name is Sakura. She's a FOnearwl. It's so cool that game is. Anyway, great job. Sakura

I'm surprised that so few people have reviewed your fanfic, since it's better than most I read on here. Good job, you had me hooked the whole time, and I await the next chapter eagerly.

From what I read so far, this seems quite interresting. This may be as enjoyable as your first story. I'm going to stay on lookout for later chapters.

COOLNESS

I'm amazed, Storm.

This is an exceptional fic.

Become a screenwriter someday!

You'll earn millions of millions of dollars.

Sorry if I'm using the wrong criteria, I'm just giving my opinion. If you asked me to make a fanfic of such quality, I'd run away. Keep up the good, no, great-no, OUTSTANDING work! :)