|Reviews for Negative Genesis|
| sonic 8/18/06 . chapter 2
great great please update soon
| Akri07 6/23/06 . chapter 2
This is very good. i hope update real soon. _ It's freaking awesome
| Sad reader 5/23/06 . chapter 2
| isthisparadise 1/22/06 . chapter 2
This is a very interesting story please update soon.
| homicidalcatgirl 12/2/05 . chapter 2
Ok, first: My actual name is Deathly Literate, but I am to lazy to log in. Now to the threats. YOU BETTER MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON, OR (Oh yeah,m here come the old english...) THOU SHALT BE REMOVED FROM THIS EARTH AND THROWN INTO THY FIERY DEPTHS OF HELL BY MY ALTER EGO AFTER BEING MERCILESSLY TORTURED WITH SOME HOOKS, KUNAI, AND A RUSTY SPORK! And as for my alter ego. She is very mean really. But not as mean as: Darkmoon's (His real name is... Herschel! Heeheehee!) MOM. Darkmoon's mom lives there. In hell. She is Jewish, and is really annoying. She is so annoying the Satan keeps her in the innermost depths of hell. Of course there is also the room were you have to do paperwork. NEVERENDING paperwork. *shock and awe* Meh... this is all from CVRPG. Google it if you wanna know. Which you do. You also want to update soon. DON'T DENY IT, FOOL. You KNOW you WANT TO! So yeah. Great story, keep going, or die after alot of torture.
| Arsenel 8/19/05 . chapter 2
nice storykeep up the writing. :D will be waiting
| Fic Slayr 8/2/05 . chapter 2
i dun get why hes losing sleep..explain it more in the nxt chap plz..
| Fic Slayr 8/2/05 . chapter 1
i really dint get what was happenin 2 the kyuubi..
| Kit89 11/5/04 . chapter 2
cool man! woot! awesome.
keep it comin'!
| Xtaci 9/4/04 . chapter 1
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| Keltosh 8/30/04 . chapter 2
Oh i really like this fic! original idea!
Especially the Kyuubi-girl. I think from the anime that Kyuubi is male, but who cares, this fic is great!
LOL and you can make a NarutoxKyuubi fic that FOR ONCE won't be Yaoi! :D Lol, ok, i don't know about that, thought it would really be original :D
Anyway, good fanfic, keep it up!
| R e c R a p t o r 8/23/04 . chapter 2
Actually I think were both wrong demons dont have genders do they? Oh and...
Update Godammit! Dont make me sick my charecters on you!
Metalic- What makes you think that we would do that remember you gave us wills of our own.
R e c- Cause Ill delete you if you dont!
Meta- Yeah right
Deleates an arm and a leg of Meta
Everyone- Update already!
R e c- good you can your body parts back.
| IniRniDefunct 8/6/04 . chapter 2
Hey Stizzle, that was a good chapter XD M, for some reason, this chapter made me sleepy. Oh no, I don't mean the whole chapter! Just Naruto... isn't sleepyness contagious? lol *waves paddle around* _ Update soon hehe
| Waffo eater 7/23/04 . chapter 2
Hurry up and make another chapter!
*stomps on your back with spiky shoes on*
| kaekeo 7/22/04 . chapter 1
Woops...add two more wws onto that address...