Very powerful and I liked this fic very much.
It was interesting to see teenager Tonks and little Draco and how they are different because of upbringing. I just loved little Draco and if not Tonks vision (?) I would say that Draco as child just don’t understand meaning of killing.
But it looks that Draco will be cruel as his Father and Aunt Bella...am happy with that.

God I love this. Well done. =]

Wow... Love the 'Avocado' spell and the last line. Very good!

Awesome.

that was adorable!! oh how precious! advacado... toocute!

I know this is supposed to be a drama, but I rather thought it was funny... Avocado, really... :) I imagine Voldie shouting 'Avocado' at Harry in GoF... And Harry shouting 'Bananas' back or something...

This was a very original idea. However, I think the buildup (as in the Tonks/Charlie/Andromeda interaction) felt very rushed, as if you wanted to get to the end part as quickly as possible. But, that criticism aside, once you do get there, the story is simultaneously creepy and sad. The reader feels both pity and horror for what Draco is and for what he will become.

I loved "I'll Avocado you" and the fact he changed his name to Harry. Fun-nee. The only part I didn't like was the last sentence, and I liked...*scratches head*

o.m.g.
this is AMAZING!
i adore this so much. i had read this a while ago, but now im taking the time to review it. this was amazing. it was really disturbing, but thats part of what made it so good!
gah
thats all i can say
gah!

Maybe not phenomenal, but still quite good. I really like how a) Draco confused Avocado with Avada Kedavra and b) how Nymphadora couldn't understand what he meant until she did. And I agree with other reviewers: Cute, but disturbing-ish.

Disturbing, and yes, cute in parts, but just brilliant over all. Good job!

::breathes::

Wow, that was amazing.

Truly stunning. And heartbreaking as well.

Simply gorgeous work.

this was awesome. perfect. you'd knock Rowling's socks off.

Well. That was interesting. At first, I was totally cracking up, because I realized nearly immediately what that BRAT was talking about, but that last sentence was so deep. Great job, anyhow. Talk to you soon!

It was so cute until the end, and then it was horrifying, and you manage that transition so well. Great job.