 hedi 2009-09-13 . chapter 4I'd love to have a shirt like that! And "Caucasian male with a chin"... One of my favourite lines! I always crack up reading it! |
 oneoffour111 2009-01-31 . chapter 14What a witty story! I always enjoy your work, and I appreciate the time you have spent so that we can have more quality fanfiction!
Learning Curve (by the way, great title) is more realistic than a lot of Spidey fanfics I’ve read, and I liked how there was so much detail about the villain. It’s not easy to make an original villain, but you handled it well!
I also liked how MJ had her suspicions about Peter and Spider-Man being the same person, but you didn’t include a sappy scene with Peter revealing and MJ crying, etc. I love those, but this fic seemed to me like more of a Spider-Man fic, and not so much a Peter one. Maybe I’m totally crazy (entirely possible!), but it seems like he two types have different moods. Anyway, I’m kind of babbling here, so I’ll sum it up: great story, excellent grammar/spelling, good villain, and please write more stories like this one!
~oneoffour1~ |
 divad relffehs 2008-02-23 . chapter 3If peter is strong enough to punch through steel plate then he should be bullet proof. Not to say that they wouldn't hurt if he got hit but they shouldn't penetrate. |
 ArmoredSoul 2007-12-15 . chapter 14At least he made it out alive and got the bad guy.
He also made an ally in the police department, which is a good thing, since now he has someone to go to with his *ahem* 'secreted' information.
I just wonder when Kingpin will finally go down, and by whose hand it shall be done. |
 ArmoredSoul 2007-12-15 . chapter 13Well, at least we'll get to know what the HELL was going through that dickbrains head when he got in on this whole thing... |
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Oh. Sh-it. |
 ArmoredSoul 2007-12-15 . chapter 10Ugh.
I wish I had access to comic updates. My latest comic that I own is from 2001. I have NO idea what the heck is going on in Marvel nowadays. |
 ArmoredSoul 2007-12-15 . chapter 9This does not bode well for Spidey...
A perceptive cop is not a good thing when you've got a secret identity to protect. |
 ArmoredSoul 2007-12-15 . chapter 8I have the answer to that, Pete:
All hell would break loose and the world as we know it would end. |
 ArmoredSoul 2007-12-15 . chapter 7Spidey is SCARY when he's **.
I swear, I thought he was gonna go ballistic and rip off that cops head for getting in his face when he's trying to help.
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Sometimes, being a super hero isn't all that it's cracked up to be... |
 ArmoredSoul 2007-12-15 . chapter 6Well, at least May is all right, though I feel bad for that cop. He's already in over his head... |
 ArmoredSoul 2007-12-15 . chapter 5Woo-boy!
Spidey is in it deep now. |
 ArmoredSoul 2007-12-15 . chapter 4Yeah.
Peter does have a pretty juvinal sense of humor. But then, most boys do.
XD |
 ArmoredSoul 2007-12-15 . chapter 3Poor Peter. Life just never gives him a break. |
 ArmoredSoul 2007-12-15 . chapter 2THANK YOU SPIDER SENSE!
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It would have been fried cop and bug pie if not for some miraculously quick action by everybody's friendly neighborhood Spider-Man. |