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| spytospy 2005-04-13 ch 18, anon. | abuseA paragraph is not a chapter. Also, your descriptions are terrible. It seems as if you've just written a fiction, and inserted the Alias characters for the heck of it. I don't know how old you are, but your grammer and prose seem very junior high school. Maybe with a bit more maturity and schooling, your writing may improve. |
| Lil Aussie Alias Chick 2005-04-13 ch 18,  | abusegees nothing is as it seems - EVER! i like it though! |
| Gizmo is Crazy 2005-04-12 ch 1, | abusecool chapter, awesome! Loving it so far! |
| landi104 2005-04-12 ch 18, | abusegreat chapter can't wait for more! |
| Lil Aussie Alias Chick 2005-03-26 ch 17, | abusei feel like im betraying vaughn wen i say i luv this story cos he's my fav ever and i love him but u make me want julian and syd to be together and that means your a really really telented writer because i have refused to read syd/srak ships before but urs is awesome so that is just attributed to your writing. |
| creampuff 2005-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm sorry but this story is absolutely ridiculous. Every bit of conflict rings false, and your "instant fixes" make it even worse. This story is so OOC for every single character, that I have no idea why you have even set in the world of Alias instead of just writing a straight out fiction story. I know you asked us not to be mean, but if you want reviews, you need to take the good with the bad. |
| landi104 2005-03-16 ch 17, | abusegreat update! can't wait for more! |
| landi104 2005-02-20 ch 16, | abusegreat update! cna't wait for more! |
| Elise 2005-02-09 ch 15, anon. | abuseThat was amazing! |
| landi104 2005-02-05 ch 14, | abusegreat chap. glad to see it return! cam't wait for the fluff! |
| sexyirishBeep 2005-02-03 ch 14, | abuseoh my god this story is beon cool pls keep it up. |
| freakyClaudia 2005-02-03 ch 14, | abuseI hope you update soon. I love the story, but maybe you should reread your work before you put it up. There are some mistakes, but other than that, great story. |
| M.B 2005-02-03 ch 14, anon. | abuseI was waiting for this story to be updated. Thankyou so much! Can't wait for the fluff chapter!:) ~Meghan |
| freakyClaudia 2005-01-29 ch 13, | abuseYou haven't updated lately, but I hope you do! You can't leave it hangin' like that! It's not fair! |
| lavenderbutterfly29 2004-12-26 ch 13, | abuseGood job. |