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Priestess Kohana
2006-07-19 . chapter 5
Aiee! *hugs* You updated! I am very glad, I enjoy this story so much, and I was glad to get the update e-mail, I very much like this chapter! And I can't wait to see what goes on with the Ranma/Akane/Ukyo situation!

Great Job and Keep it up,k?

~Kohana
thames
2006-07-18 . chapter 1
I'm not sure about this story. I'll have to read more.
Ranmawho1
2006-07-18 . chapter 5
I've gotta say, you're not a bad writer. I like what you did with Akane and Ukyo, it's original. (at least I think... I've never seen one like this before.) In any case, good job.

S.D.
ecchansama
2006-07-18 . chapter 5
Ranma does what he should've in the first place. Hmmz.

Akane is hated for being born? Uhm... Please give us a background for that later as I feel the story won't be plausible until I see a proper background for all this mess.

Ukyo... Same thing there please. Amongst the things I find surprising is the 'step-father'part.
studdevil
2006-07-18 . chapter 5
Depressing, yet happy. I feel bad for Akane-chan, but happy for her. I'm still wondering how your gonna make this a Ranma x Akane fic. Akane-chan's family is a bit out of character though... I just can't picture Kasumi being that mean. oh well. Good story! I'm waiting for an update.
Nysk
2006-07-18 . chapter 5
Interesting
thereviewergirl
2006-01-31 . chapter 4
damn... so you mean ukyo's engaged to ranma? and you said this is r/a... hmm... well... it was good anyhow... update soon! ;p
Amethyst Amber
2006-01-30 . chapter 4
Waii, much love from me! Your story is just a little depressing, but its not that over the top make me wanna cry my eyes out and never read this person again depressing. Its that nice balance.

Mou, I need to update more often. Great chapter, and I don't think I saw ANY mistakes, and thanks for the dedication! -feels loved-

SYAORAN / SAKURA FOREVER!
Priestess Kohana
2006-01-30 . chapter 4
Yay! You updated! It was quite fantastic, and ooh, it's getting so interesting! I'll wait as long as it takes for chapter 4! Cuz I am super slow at updateing too. But great job!

~Kohana
Ijoan
2006-01-30 . chapter 4
i like this story. but it is kind of gloomy, hopefuly there's a happy ending. i also, hope it's an R/A.
f-zelda
2006-01-30 . chapter 4
This story is really good! Who is Ukyos fiance? I hope to see the update soon.
Priestess Kohana
2006-01-28 . chapter 3
hey, this so far seems like a really interesting story. But it;s been 1 1/2 years sense you last updated it. I was wondering if you could again, I'd really like to see more.

great job!

~Kohana
obsidian-fox
2004-08-21 . chapter 3
Well, be sure to continue. This could be a good story if you continue it right.
obsidian-fox
2004-08-21 . chapter 2
Well... this would certainely be a little small-minded, even for the Tendos. Heck, it is small-minded even by Saotome standards.

I know that in RL, babies are sometimes blamed for the death of a mother in childbirth (sad but true). This story has more promise than your other one.

On the other hand, I'm not a big R/A fan, esp. with canon Ranma.
WillLeung
2004-08-16 . chapter 3
this is pretty interesting! i would definitely like to read more! i hope u didnt change the most important thing that would keep me reading! i hope its still a Ranma/Akane fic! :p
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