nice not bad at all.

heehee i luv this oneshot you should amke a sequel called "are you willing to marry me" heehee i luv this oneshot

I love it. It is NOT Sucky.

Off to a good start. I'd like to see this continued. Update soon. I want o see Harry propose to Luna. " )

I think I liked this. I never even thought of Luna/Harry. Interesting. I thought you portrayed Luna very well, but I don't think you used her seriousness to the best of your advantage. You know? Luna is always so flighty, so it seems, and that moment of complete seriousness could have been used more powerfully. But nice job none the less.

wow that was a really nice fic short and sweet!

Hey this is great but can you please add on I really want to know how Harry will propose to Luna.

No it wasn't! It ROCKED! Could you continue. please?

I liked it. It was sweet.

I did have a little trouble keeping track of who said what.

Also, at one point it seemed you called Mr. Malfoy Mr. Weasley, but maybe I misunderstood what was going on there.

Thanks for writing.

Tom A.

Hahahha...when I was reading through the summary, I was wondering if you got the idea from Ella Enchanted. Cute story..but at the ending you just get rid of the "him" because it ruins the catchiness. Believe me, I'm a catchy freak~

lol

You've read Ella Enchanted, haven't you?

Anyway, cute story

lol! I do hope you continue this! I love it!

That's just adorable.

But she said "no" when Harry was leaving Hogwarts... I'm assuming you meant for her to say "yes" again?

And I'm confused...why did Luna take the train when she could apparate? And why did she need an escort if they were apparating?

Sorry for being nit-picky, I guess I'm just a detail-freak...

Nice story though. = )

good story