lol, awww, that was so illegally sweet! Ash is so ickle and innocent! You have a perfect grasp on his character - nice work!

Heh, very, *very* in character, Jessica. BenRG's Rating 9/10

That was great! You should really consider writing more pokeshipping fics.

Not bad at all, JRV...not bad at all.

Ok, first I wasn't too thrilled(been reading too many Twerpshippy fics lately), but this one was just great. It wasn't mushy, it was funny and... well, it was pretty much how I see Ash... :) Can't really say anything else, but that this was extremely good!

I really liked this fic! Very nice job keeping Ash in character. It sounded almost exactly like something he would really say. I can't think of anything that needs to be changed or improved upon, though it would be nice if it was just a bit longer.

Like hello. I got 3 words for you: Write more AAML's Thank you