WOW.. this is a really good story.. I don't know if you have plans to continue or not.. if not then you need to carry on writing more stories like this one.. it was really good..

Sweet narrative! Fluffy, but sometimes that's a given.

Good job!

what can i say?? I loved it!! Short and sweet

keep writing!!

Wow. I really loved this! The way it's so lighthearted with just a touch of the insecurities that Percy has is a great change from the melodrama-laden stuff that I read (and write, sadly). You might want to check out my Percy/Oliver fic called "Extracurricular Activities" under this pen name.
Thanks!

Aw! I'm soo happy for Percy! Oh and Oliver too!

Holy heck!
So fluttery and sweet and oh so FLUFFY! Sehr lecker. Very delicious. It makes me want to go find some chocolate...

I'm surprised you don't have more reviews!
I really liked this, it was so happy and fluffy, the best kind of story in my opinion, lol. I wish there was more Oliver/Percy stuff out there, but I'm increasingly happy with the ones there are@

Wow, that's pretty good. I'm surprised you haven't gotten any reviews yet. There aren't enough Oliver/Percy slashes out there, and I wish they'd make some more.