different take on aunt margo. good fic

Oh, god, I d-don't have enough t-t-tissue! (sniff)

Beautifully done, luv. The Sorting Hat from his childhood, the teddy (I still have *my* toys) and all(sniff). The video was the end of my composure, however. Very thoughtful of Max. Lovely interaction between Logan and his aunt.

Poor Cindy and Herbal, though. Weights? Oi! Those things just don't ship well... ;)

I've tried to review a few days ago, but somehow I couldn't. I really loved it. It was sentimental and sweet. As always a good job done, and I hope to read more from you.

Great story! Fits the challenge perfectly and I loved the way you brought in the whole Harry Potter story!!

Cate

I enjoyed this--especially the Jam Pony scene and delivery, the sympathetic portrayal of Margo, and the glimpse into Logan's past. Since I'm not a Harry Potter fan, I forgot that Logan's age is such that he probably would have been one back in the day. Love the way Max decides to get a little vicarious family life by watching the tape. Nicely done all around.

aw, very good. not humourous like all the other ones have been - great that you can take a challenge like that and turn it into something meaningful for logan (and max)

I can actually see Logan connecting with Harry as a kid givin his situation as A child. Liked how you did Margo because of an idea I have floating in my head about Jonas and a certain pendant..

The part I liked the best Max and Logan watching the Video. and she pointing out the real person to thank.

Aww. I'm sniffling just thinking about this. That was lovely. I like the way you wrote Margo. Many writers have her being nasty but I never thought of her as being that way. Good job.

Beautiful story. Very in-character, and the nostalgia was well done. An interesting take on Logan's relationship with his family, both immediate and extended. Thanks for sharing this.

I would've never imagined a young Logan as Harry Potter. LOL. Logan is much more better looking than HP. ^_^

--Jade

Oh, I really ejoyed that! Definitely poignant. The whole scene of him opening up the box and taking everything out was so vivid.

Very nice touch - the Harry Potter tie-in, Sorting Hat, and Logan playing HP himself. Love it:)

Nice touching scene with Margo and some telling insight into Jonas. His involvement in Jonas's death must have been awkward for him. I like the way you touch on his feelings about it.
Excellent!