 Caitidid 2006-09-26 . chapter 1Excellent, well written, and enticing. I hope you decided to keep going with this. |
 magno.cum.gaudio 2005-08-02 . chapter 1"Max." ," he savoured the sound of her name, a name he had cried through the night in many tones from pleading to pleasure.
~ W H O A ~
I can feel the desire through your words!
Abregaza, you're incredibly good! |
 Maria656 2004-11-25 . chapter 1Cool idea-I like A/U fics-can make the world the way you like [as in virus-free]
any chance for more? |
 Natters 2004-07-20 . chapter 1very good start. heat? or just m/l attraction? |
 Fair Cate 2004-07-05 . chapter 1Wicked! I loved it! You had the whole scene perfect and described it to a tee.
I think another chapter is in order.
Cate |
 Bob 2004-07-02 . chapter 1 Come on, we all now there's no wuch thing as chance... |
 Kasman 2004-07-01 . chapter 1Ooh, that was good :) |
 Cat 2004-07-01 . chapter 1 OMG...give us MORE! Love the way you write. |
 Dark-Angel-Addict 2004-07-01 . chapter 1Yay!! A new M/L series. this was very good start. Plz update soon!! I hope this'll be a nice, fun and fluffy Max and Logan story.
I'm anticipating where you're gonna go with this.
-- Jade |
 Pink 2004-07-01 . chapter 1 You ahve to, Have to, have to, write more! |
 margaret jones 2004-07-01 . chapter 1 wow, awsome. and what potential for a longer story or even a series...maggieann452 |
 chooky 2004-07-01 . chapter 1Great start, not what I expected, but u write beautifully, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Also will u be continuing 'his eyes only'? u kinda left it hanging at a very suspenseful point. |