Excellent, well written, and enticing. I hope you decided to keep going with this.

"Max." ," he savoured the sound of her name, a name he had cried through the night in many tones from pleading to pleasure.

~ W H O A ~

I can feel the desire through your words!

Abregaza, you're incredibly good!

Cool idea-I like A/U fics-can make the world the way you like [as in virus-free]

any chance for more?

very good start. heat? or just m/l attraction?

Wicked! I loved it! You had the whole scene perfect and described it to a tee.

I think another chapter is in order.

Cate

Come on, we all now there's no wuch thing as chance...

Ooh, that was good :)

OMG...give us MORE! Love the way you write.

Yay!! A new M/L series. this was very good start. Plz update soon!! I hope this'll be a nice, fun and fluffy Max and Logan story.

I'm anticipating where you're gonna go with this.
-- Jade

You ahve to, Have to, have to, write more!

wow, awsome. and what potential for a longer story or even a series...maggieann452

Great start, not what I expected, but u write beautifully, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Also will u be continuing 'his eyes only'? u kinda left it hanging at a very suspenseful point.