 Tatsumaki-sama 9/28/07 . chapter 1So cute! Haru and Elie are so adorable together. Heh. Musica saw them kissing. |
 KittyKatluv 6/30/07 . chapter 1a bagillion thumbs up! so cute, very well done o. |
 Nikatsu 10/7/06 . chapter 1Thumbs up. :) |
 Withdrawn 6/27/06 . chapter 1Cute, touching, and very nice. I never would've thought of applying that song to Haru and Elie, though it does seem to fit extrordinarily well. I also like that this was more calm and touching than most Rave Master fics, I mean, humour is good and all, but you need a break sometimes. Great fic. |
 Yeah this is deleted 6/19/05 . chapter 1aw..._! |
 anonymous 5/4/05 . chapter 1 So cute!Please write more..or even just a second chapter..keep it up!More Haru/Elie fluffiness please... |
 supershark1 2/25/05 . chapter 1 nice, mabey you coud make a sequal to this about the dark bring or the demon card showing up or what happend in the night ,or day after this annythink like that. |
 SakuraPriestess 1/22/05 . chapter 1 I loved it. Very emotional and compassionate. Anything you write about, tell me, i'll want to read it. |
 psychedelic aya 11/20/04 . chapter 1I like it! The way you purposely took out the dialogue gave it a nice touch. Mweheh. . |
 Dimitri Plabato of The Dark Icon Writers 11/10/04 . chapter 1Triple S... Short, Simple, and sweet. Loved it |
 Pieces Of Hope 11/8/04 . chapter 1I love the fanfiction i love the song i love the entire thing! GREAT JOB! _
-Angel |
 Kazie-chan 11/2/04 . chapter 1I LOVE IT |
 Annie 10/22/04 . chapter 1 I liked it a lot. I'm drawn to the ocean too... Curse you land-locked Pennsylvania! CURSE YOU! |
 Pokute 10/19/04 . chapter 1COOL! |
 sasha 9/13/04 . chapter 1 it was so beautiful! |