That was a every emotional chapter that would have been hard to pull off if not for your amazing writting skills.
There was not one word in this that did not pull its weight and every sentence drew me into the story futher.
You are an extremely talented writer

Poor Snape. You know i though i was the only one who got the fact that Harry had mently raped Snape. So sad.

Thank you. I thought I was the only one that felt Snape's violation in this scene. Harry, it seems, is like James in some respects. Great insight.

Fantastic story! I hope you will write more! You have the gift of seeing the 'old' with new eyes.

This is awesome. The writing is beautifully executed. I cried. It's so sad. This really is an excellent start for a story. Maybe you could add a few chapters? Hope this review is some motivation.

damn! that's good cali! i mean real damn good! this is an excellent start to the Harry/Snape story i am determined to get you to write. we must discuss this... awesome fic love!

~Artemis Luna Diana~

hm this was certainly an interesting piece, I had originally thought that Snapes experience was like that of being raped but so many people said it was nothing like that so I gave up on that explanation. You have brought it to a new light. I think you're a good writer and I hope all your pieces are as good as this one.
-Kitten

Well done. Very well done.

I liked it. Got the link from you in a chat with ALD. Glad to see that you're a decent writer. I'd be interested to see your Snape/Hermione.

Indeed! This is a wonderful piece. I did feel bad for both Harry and Snape over this incident. Wouldn't it have been funny if the two of them could have talked this over instead of doing what they each did, because Harry did not laugh at the scene that he saw. he was highgly disturbed by it.

I do agree with you that Snape felt that he was mentally raped in this scene. That was a good metaphor for his experience, and this certainly sheds some sympathy uppon Snape, that Rowling, nor anyone else, feels much inclined to show him.

oh my god that is so sad. please tell me this isn't a one shot.

Exactly. Why do some people think he was too harsh and shouldn't have stopped teaching him?