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| q.thews 2007-10-06 ch 11,  | abuseNice, she got it a little to easy (not speaking about her health...) maybe if Her assistant would have said something against ? Ciao! |
| cherryblossomjen 2007-06-21 ch 3, | abuseWhoa, what a cliffhanger! It's a bit AU now considering 'Home' but its wonderful nontheless. Oh, and Trip winking is icing on the cake. yum. |
| cherryblossomjen 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abuseYup, the infamous miscommunication is alive and well apparently. |
| rankokun alpha 2004-11-29 ch 11, | abusei loved this story too bad in the series that tpols father is dead! hopefully you keep writing this storyline! |
| Cherilynn64 2004-08-14 ch 11, | abuseYay! Wonderful job! When's the wedding? (hint hint!!) |
| Elizabeth Annette 2004-08-11 ch 11, | abuseI loved it! no sequal? |
| Trex Kitten 2004-08-11 ch 11, | abuseAnother story down, hopefully a lot more to go. Loved the TOS tie-in, and especially Polly's Mum. I look foward to reading more of your TnT fic. |
| Phaser Lady 2004-08-10 ch 11, | abuseGood story, thanks for sharing. Liked the tie in with T'Pol's nephew. |
| Sash29 2004-08-10 ch 11, | abuse". . . my nephew, Sarek"? You slipped that in so smoothly I almost missed it! If you do a sequel, I hope you include Sarek. Or do a completely new story from his POV! I've enjoyed this whole story, but the last chapter and epilogue were especially well done. I liked the way both of T'Pol's parents sent Trip their regards -- a lovely way of conveying their acceptance and approval without having to express it in emotional terms. It struck me as very Vulcan. I also liked your use of the mind mild as a healing technique. It seemed so plausible in the story (and resolved Archer's guilt so well), that it's a shame it isn't real! I hope you're working on something else -- I very much enjoy your writing and I'm looking forward to more! (I almost forgot -- thank you for being so responsive to reader comments. The breaks between scenes were much appreciated!) |
| Rinne 2004-08-10 ch 11, | abuseVery sweet. And a nice bringing in of Sarek. I really loved that you didn't just make this story about Trip and T'Pol and all lovey dovey. You fleshed it out nicely. |
| Jenna 2004-08-10 ch 11, anon. | abuse*giggles* Sarek must take after his aunt. LOL! |
| dream maven 2004-08-09 ch 9, | abuseLiking it so far, you might want to consider putting an extra space or two between scene changes. |
| Qwertyuiop 2004-08-09 ch 9, anon. | abuseGood chapter. You might want to put some sort of break between scene changes. It is easier to read where they are. |
| Sash29 2004-08-08 ch 9, | abuseLovely chapter, and worth waiting for! (I agree with the previous comment about the need to signal scene changes -- maybe a row of asterisks? It's a minor thing, and didn't detract from an excellent chapter.) |
| Jenna 2004-08-08 ch 9, anon. | abuseAw... how sweet! My only thing with this chappie was that there aren't clear indicators of breaks between scenes. I was reading about Archer and then suddenly T'Pol was talking. You might consider adding something. But great chapter story-wise! |