Love this story, its great! keep up the great work ^_6

Aww...what a wonderful beginning to this story, which I found both sad and whimisally uplifting as well. I particularly liked the angle you've taken o the child abuse of little James/Harry with a great deal of sensitivity and understanding. Also you seem to have realised that its not totally necessary to go into graphic detail about the abuse but mentioned enough to give the story a sense of reality. Well done!

I think that when Severus does bond further with little James/Harry and tells him more about his parents, the magic, the wizarding world in general. I think that James should be told his real name is Harry James Potter - but offer to allow him to known as James Evans-Snape. As James has always been known as "James" not Harry. On the other hand allowing James to known by his true name Harry Potter-Snape might enable him to put his past behind him. If you decided to go for hiding James Evans-Snape route then I think he should be enrolled at Hogwarts the following year (the same year Ginny starts), to allow him to properly recover/and become more adapt to the magical world, and with his education, and learning to socialise with other children and adults. So what do you think?

That was interesting. I got a good laugh when the man said good luck at Hogwarts. That was great. Update soon.

keep goin! i like it!

PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY

Just goodly & neat, written great as well

I'm enjoying this fic so far, but there's a few problems.

Firstly, no British school has a principal. We have Head Teachers/Headmasters/just plain Heads.

Secondly, at the beginning of chapter 5, how exactly does James stutter sign language? Are his hands shaking that much, or what?

great fic, the dursleys got what they deserved and won't have a pleasant time in jail, glad severus found harry in time before anything else could happen, no Albus is planning again, that can't be good, update soon

Really good. I'm looking forwards to reading the rest of it if/when you continue it.

No puedes dejarlo asi, por favor, pon le aunque se aun epilogo de la nueva familia ñ_ñ, por favor. te quedo maravilloso, muchas felicidades
Mireya Humbolt
"Amar es entregarlo todo, sin resveras, ni condiciones aunque al final solo quede llorar de dolor"

Great story so far, though I have to wonder how the photos got developped/printed so fast in chapter 2?

Um, just wondering, but what were the words that were carved into his skin??!!

SEQUEL! PLEASE?

love it, please update

I love this story so far, but I have a question. Is he deaf, or just mute?