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| ArodLoverus2001 2006-07-19 ch 12, anon. | abusegreat story!! |
| Irina89 2006-04-30 ch 12,  | abuseDon't get me wrong here, I loved your fic, really, but if you're going to use french, to which I say yes do please: "vive la France", or any other language, make sure the sentences are grammatically correct and that you're using the right words... So if you want to come back at me or I'm not sure can you change a text once it's on the site?? well here is my email: just put "poison" in the subject line. |
| Kea 2005-07-14 ch 11, anon. | abuseWhat an amazing fic. WOW! I love a good Jack/Irina fic. And the spy interactions of Sydney with her Mom and Dad were very believable like watching the show. I loved the ending. Keep up your great fics. |
| K 2005-07-13 ch 12, anon. | abuseGreat fic. Wow and what a cool ending. |
| Danielle87 2005-05-24 ch 12, | abuseGREAT!! i was so sad when i thought there for a minute you were going to have irina die. but when i found out u were just messing i was so happy. i will for sure look for your other stories. the only wish i have is that you would have put a scene with irina and sydney at the end. but it was still really good. |
| Aurinko 2005-04-24 ch 11, | abuseIrina CAN'T die! (Great story, by the way, and update soon!) But you can't just kill her off! This is fanfiction, not television, and you just made J/I work out nicely...please? |
| Danielle87 2005-04-22 ch 11, | abuseplease don't make her die. Please haha. i hate sad endings! i want it to end happy with irina alive plesae. but it was a really good chapter. |
| sarkfan1 2005-04-22 ch 11, anon. | abusethat was really good i loved it. You should have some Sark and Irina interaction, that would be cool. |
| sarkfan1 2005-04-20 ch 10, anon. | abusethat was really good i loved it you did a great job so keep it coming |
| Danielle87 2005-03-14 ch 9, | abusei Just finished ch.9 and can't wait for the next one. i just hope you don't make anyone die, and make it end happy. i am a fan of happy endings haha. Irina Rocks!! |
| derevkobristow-spawn 2004-10-02 ch 7, | abuseHello... nice update. A bit of a cliffhanger-y though. Hope you update the next chapter soon :D |
| Eyghon 2004-10-02 ch 7, anon. | abuseyeah ! Finally, Jack is confronted to Irina, I like that ! I can't wait for more, please update soon! Poor Syd, what is she going to think of her dear mother... |
| derevkobristow-spawn 2004-09-13 ch 6, | abuseaw... irina is not really bad, Sydney... she's jsut complicated... Good work dude, update soon :D |
| gavin 2004-08-21 ch 5, anon. | abuseGlad to see an update. Keep 'em comin'. Like this story alot. Wouldn't mind seeing a nice a** whuppin' if they try and take Irina into custody. |
| morrisseylover 2004-08-19 ch 5, | abuseI LURV IT! Please update soon. |