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Hoeun
2007-07-25
ch 1,
abuseI hope you realize that I'm going to have to put in my contacts again, because this made me bawl. So sad! I loved it.
zuz
2006-10-23
ch 1,
abuseOMG, that is so sad. It's so beautiful, too.

it kind of reminds me of The Notebook (by the same guy who wrote A Walk to Remember, i don't recall his name). Have you read that?

the zuz
Uzamaki-Girl
2006-07-04
ch 1,
abuseT.T

Poor Harry and Ginny!!

Wonderful writing.
B-A-HPlova22
2005-06-02
ch 1,
abuseUh...
*deep, annoyed sigh*
Uh...
How could you do that? Do you ENJOY tormenting people?!? URRGH!!
You should look into romance tragedies. You should write one, then tell everybody what a sad story it is. People would buy it!
Uh...
I still can't get over how anti-happy that was. You know why I hate it so much? Because you kept me on a string, making me think that there WOULD be a miracle. But that was the point, wasn't it?
All in all, I'd say you did a wonderful job. Very touching, and all, and, if I was in a really sad mood, I might have actually enjoyed it. Is it possible to like a story without enjoying it? Because that's what happened with this fic.
I'll stop talking now. You're a great writer, never give it up.
Galaen
2005-04-12
ch 1,
abuseOh Goddess, that was so sad...oh, I feel so badly for poor Harry. To lose Gin like that...that's so awful. It's really well written but it's a difficult subject to read about.
LostxBroken
2005-02-15
ch 1,
abuse*sniff* That was so sad though beautifully written.*sniff* Poor Harry
El Shabang
2004-08-26
ch 1,
abuseAww, poor Harry, and poor Ginny, such a sad ending.

I do like the way there was a twist, you wait for the miricle that never happens.

Congratulations on another heart renching tale, that despite it being on the short side, still managed to not only feel the charactors pain but make you able to see from their perspctive, and then cry afterwards.

Well done, do write another, anything if you stop writeing it will be a loss to the fan fiction comunity, your stories manage to engage the reader like no other, well done once more.
Barzel
2004-08-18
ch 1,
abuseah! -That was prob the most depressing H/G fic i've ever read!
It was VERY good, but i beg of you- please write a happy one next time! PLEASE!
joviality
2004-07-31
ch 1,
abuseVery well written..
sweetmelody
2004-07-18
ch 1,
abuseIt's beautiful. I love it.
Harrie
2004-07-06
ch 1,
abuseGreat story Ashwinder, I couldn't help but cry because it reminded me of my Grandpa's passing, he died almost 8 years ago and till today I hadn't really thought about it, so I thank you for that.
lalaluu
2004-07-06
ch 1,
abuseThat was really sad. Brutally sad at the end, really. Very well thought out and written. Thank you!
guitarzac
2004-07-02
ch 1,
abuseYou are, as usual, wonderful. My favorite author. Thanks for the fics!
pdlegirl
2004-07-01
ch 1,
abuse*sniff* You made me cry-again! I love your stories because they make me feel. Good job. Keep Writing!
Shaldana Blackwater
2004-07-01
ch 1,
abuseOwtch, mate.

Absolutely beautiful.
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