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EvilGenius Koji
2007-01-27 . chapter 44
Aw...sad/sweet ending. I like Dean. ^-^ So...he's going online to meet Miku eh? *smirk* I always felt sorry for BT after watching .hack//SIGN...stupid Crim. Too bad there's no sequel to their relationship eh? But the extra bit at the end was sweet. ^0^
RyougaZell
2006-03-30 . chapter 44
Awesome trio of stories.
Took me a while to read them
Specially since I just got Outbreak and Quarantine 2 months ago, so I left the lecture on standby.

I liked a lot you involved characters like Tsukasa, Tokuoka, Bith and Rena. Too bad no other characters appeared. At least Piros could have, being a programmer for CC (if my sources are not incorrect that is).

I certainly can't wait for your next hack fic. With what? One week to go for the premier of .hack//ROOTS?

Excellent.
Namonaki Pharaoh
2006-01-08 . chapter 44
Awesome! *claps*
Oh, I was so hooked on this little miniseries you created. I can see it continuing though this little addition is nice way to end the story. It took me a while to read all three parts b/c I had to enjoy them.

This was truly original & like I mentioned I was hooked and had to read. Ah backtrack to another part where Dean tells Kite the whole not having to worry about a 'hack writer' putting Kite & Blackrose in an awkward relationship was priceless (I was laughing so hard). XD

I liked how Aura woke Dean up & I liked Dean as a character. Your series impressed & amused me! :)

Great job & good luck on any future stories! ^^
chicken con carne
2005-10-01 . chapter 44
Hey, great story!

I liked all of the stories, though sometimes I was like that wouldn't happen or something like that, but over all I like it.

I like Dean a lot as well, you made him feel real, like he should've been in the games and all. Unlike some authors your character isn't a powerful know it all.

Over all I can't wait for you to start writting a new story!

-SRD
junyortrakr
2005-08-06 . chapter 44
It was just one short letter. Why would that give Dean adequate incentive to change his plans? *rolls eyes* I really don't need an answer for that, do I. I am impressed by how quickly it got there, though: overseas mail is usually incredibly slow. (I have a little experience with such.)

Anyway, it was a good ride. As oblivious as I am, I have little idea what online game you're thinking of, but then, it wouldn't take long to figure it out once the story started, would it?

Thanks again.

Paul
FrequencyQueen
2005-08-05 . chapter 43
Great story! You tied it up quite nicely! You write really deep characters, and your plot was great! Now...when's the sequel?
junyortrakr
2005-08-02 . chapter 43
Well, it's finally done. I was wondering if you'd get it done before schools started again.

Well, that was a nice ending. Dean will get plenty of punishment for doing what he did just by having to deal with all that legal stuff. True, he isn't up on charges, but someone could always change their mind and decide he should be.

It would be intersting to speculate on how their lives went on from here. One would assume that they would be much more mundane for the most part, but you never know.

Anyway, I certainly enjoyed the ride. Thanks for taking the effort to entertain us.

Paul
Jonathan Priest
2005-08-02 . chapter 43
Yeah, too lazy to log in. But, in words of people greater than I, "Good things come to those who wait" and this is very true. Your story was wonderfully scripted and you did an exceptional job tying up all the lose ends. I mean, what I wouldn't give to have your talent with just great story telling, this was absolutely fantastic.

And as Berry said, wonder what more you have planned. So in closing, I'll add some other pearls of wisdom some other dead guy said, "All good things must come to an end." Indeed they do, but what a journey it was. For that Ren, I will always be an avid fan. Thanks for such a wonderful story my friend, it was really great.
Shadow Rave
2005-08-01 . chapter 43
An so this is the end...

I feel kinda sad after reading all three stories. This was a great trilogy to the very end. My hats off to you.
Regrem Erutaerc
2005-08-01 . chapter 43
Very nicely done, but rather long. But, it was a great ending to a great fic. Well done.^_^
Regrem Erutaerc
2005-08-01 . chapter 43
Very nicely done, but rather long. But, it was a great ending to a great fic. Well done.^_^
SmkViper
2005-08-01 . chapter 43
Very well-written piece of fiction. And quite enjoyable too. I'm glad you took the extra time to tie it all up perfectly. If you do any more fiction, I will be one of the first in line to read it. ^_^
Lumenadducere
2005-07-31 . chapter 43
At last, we have the epilogue. And I must say, it's quite a fitting conclusion. Closes everything off, yet still leaves a little bit of the end to the imagination. I like that.

Congratulations on finally finishing. It's been a great journey, and I'm glad you stuck through with it until the end. Thank you for a wonderful tale, and I'll see you around on LJ.
Goldberry
2005-07-31 . chapter 43
*sighs happily* This is all I wanted and more, Ren-kun. I don't even think I have the proper words to say how much I love this. Everyone got their resolution and I almost skipped around the room victoriously when Kite and BR finally got their kiss! OH HAPPY DAY! Their emotion was realistic and it made me SQUEE LIKE A HAPPY FANGIRL!

Everything just ended so well, Ren. It was definitely worth the wait, and now I can only wonder what you're going to do next! Will you keep writing? Maybe I can bribe you to write a drabble or two for me every once in awhile? *winks* In any case, it's been a good journey and I'm feeling all mushy now... *hugs you* Thank you for this, Ren-kun! It was beautiful!
junyortrakr
2005-04-26 . chapter 42
Well, that went well enough. I would guess it's just as well Hiro's mom doesn't really know what happened. I suppose we get to see the big wrap-up next chapter. Who saga has been fun. I'll miss it after you finish it up soon.
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