cool story.. made me smile...

And a big "Guffaw!" in your direction! :)

What a giggle. Loved the hat and Logan's memories about it. Very thoughtfully, done, luv.

And something fishy is *definitely* at Sea World! (laughter) Smells fishy too, it would seem. Certainly an unexpected kiss, for Logan *and* Louise. :)

Of course, now I'm worried about what will happen to the animals when Logan does his broadcast...

Thank you, once again, for introducing me to Cape Haven. Super challenge! Got a lot of us writing, it did! ;)

This was a very imaginative way to answer the Cape Haven Writers challenge. I really enjoyed reading it. The image in my mind of Logan being kissed by 'Louise' is making me laugh even as I type this. That walrus has good taste. Max's "feigned inattention" while Logan is telling her about Sea World and her comment about fish not being a priority unless it's on a plate was very in character, as was Logan's reaction. Good work. Thanks for giving me a good laugh.

Wonderful story! I really had fun reading this.
I loved the imagination of Logan with a fishing hat as well as Max`s curiosity about Logans childhood (it`s so cute).
especially liked this line: *...She shrugged. "Girl on the run's got more important things to worry about than fish—unless they're on a plate."...* - that`s definitly Max.
The walrus-scenario was funny and I can imagine Logans embarrassment when the whole crowd is laughing at him (poor guy!). I was glad that he changed his mind and allowed himself to be amused and I was even more happy about the *promising?* ending.

Thanks.

Thanks for writing such a cute story. I almost felt on the ground with the hat slogan... It also brought me some good memories of one of my favorite place, Sea World.

I enjoyed reading this. The events at the ending were definitely unique, and the exchange at the beginning was great, too. Thanks for sharing this!

as max said - "i find it hilarious!"
love the kiss, and love how you made it just a lil bit shippy at the end.

excellent work, i really enjoyed this, so you gonna continue and let us all know what happens with this "fishy business"? i hope so. keep up the great work!

Hee hee - that was funny! Logan kissed by a walrus with incredibly good taste:)
Love all the M/L banter and Max eating the rasberries and Logan's distraction as she eats one, lol! Hee - I chuckled at the spider web comment. Nice touch Max's comment that she doesn't keep boxes of stuff - very Max.
The fishing hat slogan made me laugh, LOL. The writing of the trip to Seaworld was lovely and vivid. Hee, Max's comment about coming back for the pearls tomorrow night! And a very nice final thought from the two of them that made me smile:) Thankyou!

He...now that was cute :). I've been kissed by a seal, but not a walrus :) - fish breath, ew!