AW
At first, I didn't want to read it. But I'm glad that I did.
SO CUTE
I wish there were more NephxAmi pairings. :]

cute

XD
Wow, this is really good! They're both in character, and I'm really glad I found this! I found the special act a bit dissapointing since there was no Nephekichi/Ami.
Thanks for writing this!
:)

Cool
I always know these 2 r the BEST
couple
so is Venus & zoisite

Just fantastic. It was so cool to read Neph's inner thoughts as they contemplated his existence for Beryl and realizing his love for Ami. Ah, this story was just so fantastic. You're one of the best PGSM writers I've read!

fluffy, yes, but not in a bad way, really. I liked it a lot.

nice

Aw... that was nice and sweet. Haven't finished watching PGSM yet. Have two more episodes to go before the end. But I'm a already a fan of this pairing. Hope you write more of Ami and Nephrite. A multichapter would be nice heheh ^_^

God.
This fanfic is so cute! same with the first part!! It's so adorable and really IC! You just HAVE to continue it! *dies from such good fic of her fav pairing ever* I think this 2 fics of yours are the best ones I've read so far *__* I wove you!

PS. SMercury is my fav xD in Manga/Anime/PGSM xDD Right now I'm in PGSMSuperFan mode xP

remember me?! I still love this story

Oh! I loved it! how do I enter my story of nephrite/ami? I love that story you know! 100 100 forever! hey! I'm writing a story about them,its going great right now.SO I hope if I sign up for fanfiction,then I'll let you know! you write really nice! So do I! I love writing,drawing...you know stuff like that! So I want to see the other chapters! Go ahead! I'll comment soon! bye!

Ha HA! *mad fangirl grin* They're so cute together.
Ah, my favorite PGSM pairing..

Valar, I'm obsessed. XD

Was looking around for quality Live Action SM fics and found this one. Really nicely done. They were both generally in character, and whenever they didn't seem to be there was an internal conflict in each of them that explained why. Really cool.
-SAT

this story is the best one i've ever read. It makes a picture in my my mind so well, it looks like a episode. It should be one.

This was adorable! Much better than how the show has turned out so far. T_T Maybe in the special act... Anyway, I loved it!!