I read this fic forever ago, although I'm unsure if I actually read the whole thing since it was such a long time ago and I think it might have been when I wasn't on the internet as often... Anyway, I'm very glad I decided to go back through and read it. I've been re-reading favorite stories of mine to see if I still like them enough to keep them there, lol. And I'm very pleased to say that your fic is definitely staying there! You've more than improved this story! :D
And I must say, that scene with Charlie (I assume) crawling across Harry's bed after peaking through the curtain will forever haunt my memory. That was so freakin' creepy! I cannot get it out my mind... I will admit, though, some scenes were confusing. Mostly at the end with the main fight with Voldemort when he's possesing Draco. Also, when Draco stabs himself in the heart to follow Harry after Voldemort did the same to him. Think maybe just the chest area would have been better than the actual heart... Would just seem more plausible, I guess. Although, I guess it is a magical world. ; I thought it was very interesting how you had James try to bring Harry to their side while Sirius fought him so Harry could get away. Definitely not typical for the father to want the son to join him, lol. I liked how Draco convinced Harry to come back to him, though.
I really, really wonder if Harry will be able to talk again as well. And I need to see Hermoine and Ron apologize even if it wasn't exactly their fault. I like how Draco was so forgiving and understand towards Harry - sometimes it seemed a bit out of character, but you can't really help that in this - but for the most part it still seemed plausible, how he took him to the Pitch and made him fly again, how he beat the crap outta Ron! lol, even though Hermoine's response was super annoying, trying to make Harry apologize and saying that he was being dramatic. I was actually surprised that all of them were being possesed at one point or another by Voldemort, I assumed that it would be some sort of charm or potion, or something along those lines... Oh, and I thought it was kinda odd that Draco said Voldemort's name, but I also can't really remember the series that well so... Maybe not. :D The rings were awesome and a really great gift. Wouldn't it be great if such a thing could exist? Well, it'd be awesome if even magic could, huh? Lol. I would love to see the epilogue, though, and I hope things are going well with you. :D
Anyway, sorry for rambling. I just wanted to let you know how much of a great job you did on this fic and how much you improved it. Great job! :D

Can't... Breathe... Too... Much angst X_X

This story was both happy and sad at the same time. Are you still planning on writting an epilogue or did you change your mind?

Nice fic. Depressing, but nice.

I just finished reading this and I felt compelled to review and let you know how much I loved this fic. It's definitely one of my favorites. I admit I was a bit concerned about the length because sometimes long fics just go on and on and at a certain point you just want it to end, but this was amazing all the way through and I actually found myself dreading the end because I didn't want to stop reading it. So thank you very much for this fantastic fic, and while I would love to read that epilogue (I need to see Ron and Hermione apologize even if it wasn't their fault), I can't thank you enough for finishing this.

Yayyy! I loved it! It was very sweet,and it also kinda empisises the point of it being sweet that they haven't really gone 'all the way' yet. Though, I must amit I'm still pissed that they didn't fined out exactedly who raped him and give him the ass whoopin' of HIS LIFE!? HELL YEAH BITCHES! WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE TOUCHING MY -I mean Dracos-HARRY POTTER?! Well,unless it was Ron of course. But any way-this was aboustley beeautifulllll! Well,gotta go-ciao!

Good story , thanks for completing it

I absolutely loved although I'm Andrew because you didn't post the epilogue, so ya

How in the world did Hermione get the map? The last I read about Harry's trunk was that Draco figured out the password and got the cloak out but put the map back in there.

I literally read this fic in a day and I LOVE IT!

You did a really good job, I was sooooo curious to find out what was going on!

Love the whole H/D relationship, it seems so plausible ;)

anyway, I just wanted to let you know that you've gained a fan ;)

xoxo

Well. I'm horrible at gushing and whatnot, so lemme just write whatever pops into my head.

1.) When Draco made the list about Harry, the first thing I was screaming in my mind was 'BURN THE DAMNED PAPER'. Because those things always attract trouble.

2.) Pansy and Blaise, pretty much all of the Slytherins were awesome. I know it wasn't their fault, but you Gryffindors suck.

3.) This was a fantastic fic.

Have a wonderful day.

Loooove it

Loooove it

Geeez, so much mystery! XD Oh well, reading on...

This story is absolutely amazing! I'll admit the first chapter kind of confused me at first (nothing made sense for a while, but I think that's because there was so much mystery). Anyway, I really like how sweet yet imperfect their relationship is. I like it that, despite their friendship (soon to be more?) doing very well, they still argue and disagree on things. It just makes everything more awesomely human! :D

Thanks for the wonderful story! I'll keep reading now