ouch the angst is killing me, but the irony is wonderful.

Loved it! Both were in-character and the ending was bittersweet. Well done! However, the link seems to be broken (404 not found). Could you possibly send me a link via PM or email that is correct? All in all, a splendid job.

The ending was almost sad but the story was great!

I Didn't Understand The Placing Of The Words. Could You Possably Explain Them?? I Understood How You Placed Them, just Not Their Meanings.

YYWKMN.

genius :P LOL I realli hoped voldemort thought of that haha..

Wonderful one-shot :)
Thanks for this story ^^

Harry stared blankly at the headmaster for several moments before abruptly bursting out laughing. “I’m sorry,” he said, wiping tears from his eyes, “But what on Earth could have possessed him to think that was a good plan?”

^ Best lines ever :D

Despite the fact that Harry is the one with the "crush" here, he is pleasingly self-possessed and doesn't let Severus walk all over him. The progression to Severus admitting to himself that he cares was brilliant. I love that they see the same thing in the mirror ^_^

Woo. Great story!

Hello! I love your story. I wanted to read the full version, but can't seem to get to the website. Could you post it on ? Please?

Pottertwin

Absolutely gorgeous.

I really enjoyed the story!
I found Snape though to be slightly OOC but I like Snarry pairings where he does kinda warm up to Harry but still retains his scarcastic demeanor.
It would have been cool to stretch it into a fullblown story with more details and more twists and turns. It's fully possible. I would read it in an instant.

I love it!
Is so cool!

That was very good. It amazes me that you can put an entire story into one chapter and have it come out well, but you can and it does. Well done.

I loved it!

perfect!! I loved it! +Fav