   CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing 7/5/11 . chapter 7Please continue if you're still a part of fanfiction dot net |
| Alana Quinn 6/29/03 . chapter 7 That was really kewl. Gohan meets uo with Piguro again. I never thought about that. It was really good tho. I don't think enough time was spent on Gohan's time with the orphans. Really cool story. Well done.
Lol.
gohans-girl_ |
| Lady Adelia 6/26/03 . chapter 6 he needs a better outfits to wear |
| Lady Adelia 6/26/03 . chapter 7 lol |
| Lady Adelia 6/26/03 . chapter 2 Who is Piguro? |
| Midnight Writer2 9/16/01 . chapter 5 i like this story! |
| Marz 6/6/01 . chapter 7 This was so good I could scream! I LOVE Gohan! He can't get enough glory! I'm tellin' ya, Gohan's the best. Anyhoo, wonderful story, can't wait to read more of your work! Ja ne! |
| GOHAN 1/30/01 . chapter 1 VERY GOOD STORY |
| gohan 1/4/01 . chapter 1 umm i don't know about the city. but good story |
| mr. dumb 8/14/00 . chapter 1 Oh .. my.. god.. you are so good! I NEEVVVERRRR would of thought of Piguro showing up in your fic. I haven't wroten a story before, but i plan to try some time soon. please help me out and e-mail me, i wanna talk to you! you're so good *sniff* |
| kari 7/26/00 . chapter 1 Loved it, now I can read to the farm Yaaay _ kari |
| kari 7/26/00 . chapter 1 The city. du du du duuuuu! sorry. great fic. Man you are a good writer _ kari |
| kari 7/26/00 . chapter 1 It's impossible for you to reck any of your stories. I have to say you are one of my fav authers next to barbo-chan and haley-dale _ kari |
| kari 7/26/00 . chapter 1 it wasn't that short. Any way, keep writing this is great! _ kari |
| kari 7/26/00 . chapter 1 My dad looked at me strangly when I burst out laughing, one this though it is spelt "saiyan". 10/10 for a great fic. _ kari |
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