u kno wat ur problem is?? ur unrealistic (one death doesnt mean everythings hunky-dory or canon, death that Moldieshorts doesnt even like kill dude...) and G-R-E-E-D-Y! uve got sixty ** five reviews while i dont even have like, the 2 combined on the SEVEN stories i had on hpff. i just quit the site anyway. they cn go ** themselves. and so cn u.

Gah, really good, could use some more detail but it was still really good. A sequal would be awesome!

one of my favorites so far, ill keep readin

so far it is really good.

this rocked! MAKE A SEQUEL!

i love it! (and i've only read three chapters lol)

this story is pretty god you misspelled bloody though its spelled bloody not bloddy

this story is awesome! i love it! i love the fluff! its so romantic! keep it up! i think there should be someone getting hurt in the next story or chapter or sequel. That someone like maybe say Harry? But i love the story! its great! please keep writing and i'll keep reading and thats a promise!

Tis good i do hope you will go to the next year
keep up the good work.

:D

I would thik harry would be ALOT more tormented. He's just lost his God-father and found out his life ends with murder- either his own or him murdering Voldemort. If he had bad dreams and sulked alot over Cedric's death, I imagine the new burdens added to his already burdened shoulders in OotP would make him a great deal more miserable.

It seems like everything is happening so fast. But I still like it so far. I'm not going to review every chapter since you've already got up to number 29 up. I will review the chapters on the way to 29 that I feel need a bit of constructive criticism. Well that's all then. Hopefully you won't see this name again until chapter 29. *wink*

Very good story. WRITE MORE OR I WILL TRACK U DOWN AND GLUE U TO YOUR DESK CHAIR UNTILL U WRITE MORE! lol Read mine if u want!!1 It's a Harry/Ginny Ron/Hermione fic. It's called At Long Last!!

If i've reviewed already and said the same thing (for the life of me I cannot remember a single thing I did yesterday! ARGH!) this is so cool and I am really mad that you only have about 50 reviews. Hurry up with the sequel? Pleze? LOL, and you can have an extra big piece! *Gives really big pieve of strawberry shortcake* Yum!

FOrest

this is awesome, you did a great job
i wanna sequel!

Yes, it was fluffy all right, but I'm sure that all of us readers knew what we were getting ourselves into when we started reading it. Just a tip, you would have received more reviews and had more readers if it hadn't been R-rated (you never ended up using that big capital R anyways, did you?). If a story becomes R-rated in a later chapter, you can always post it as PG until that chapter, and then you can switch to R. By then you'll have a following, etc, so that the reviews will keep coming. But whatever.