Your story line was very good! It was a little soap opera - ish, but it was nice. I didn't like the random Japanese, though, especially the "arigato".

loved it tnx for writing it!

I'm too lazy to login, so I'm leaving an unsigned review. It is a well written story...I really enjoyed reading it. The death of Kikyou solution was kind of a killjoy, though, I'll admit...just a little too convenient, if you ask me. But, given their personalities, it would have dragged on forever otherwise, huh? Oh well.

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amazing story!! my heart is pounding and i can't stop shaking. well done!! :D

WOW... I am speechless...It certainly got me. Poor Kagome suffering from her. Inuyasha should have told her. and poor child...
Dont know what to think anymore or what I would have done in this situation... Keep up the good work!

wow, i really like thi!! this fic has been bugging at me for days (in a good way, thinking about how things will work out with them and such) so i just had to come back and fave it!

I loved this story, amazing how you have everything just right and explained in just two chapters! It made me cry, that was so sad I felt sorry for all of them. I don't think it seemed soap opera-ish at all. I think you did a great job, especially when Kagome forgives him and accepts Sayo!

I love ur story

Man, this story had me on edge the whole time. Believe me there were a couple times when I wanted to hurt InuYasha for hurting Kagome. And more than a few choice words I wanted Kagome to yell at him. But his secret made the plot interesting.

My favorite part would have to be when he jumped over the couch to sleep with her. I'm a sucker for fluff scenes! I really thought he was going to back to bed too!

This was really well written story. You did a great job.
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I loved it, It just had so much raw emotions

This story is really well written and I really liked it. You think you really know a guy, you know? I feel like I've got so much emotions and thoughts about the stupidity of Inu Yasha, but at the same time I still love the fact that he loves Kagome. I suppose like Kagome I'm also annoyed by the fact that she can't have him entirely.

What really peeved me off is the fact that he said, "Kikyou went through the exact same situation. I wasn’t about to abandon her a second time." Kikyo's situation was not the same, not really. The first time she knew of the consequences--perhaps not completely and I'm sure she was scared out of her wits--but her goal was to have that baby with or with a husband/somewhere to be by her side even if Inu Yasha wanted to be that person/vowed to be that person. However, when you have been showered by love from your husband, living this dream life only for him to suddenly disappear when you need him is called complete blind-siding. I understand and get the fact that saving Sayo is more important than being there for Kagome, but in my eyes their situation was not the same and to say so is an insult to both women.

I keep thinking that if I was Kagome the first thing out of my mouth after he said that would probably have been, "And in doing so you abandoned me" before dropping his hand and before yelling at him, but I'm ever the dramatic XD

Though some questions bother me--Did Hojo leave the house yet? I swear they left before he did XD And at the end when they were all lovey-dovey and in an embrace I'm just wondering where the hell did Sora go? Wasn't she just between her parents and suddenly she vanished into thin air? I know I would have pooped in my diaper or cried for food by now with the way those two took so long talking.

Anyway, adding this fanfiction to favourite story list =D Really good stuff.

Wow. That was powerful... seriously. Awesome job! Very unique and different from the oneshots I'm used to! Kagome really loves Inuyasha... I dunno if I'd be able to forgive him for that one! He has another child and leaves her when she's having hers... that's a little too much! SO MUCH LOVE KAGOME!

I loved it, It was just so much raw emotions. It was the perfect length if it went on anymore it would of been pointless! It was fantastic.

really nice story... interesting... but what Inuyasha did to Kagome was really bad... he should have thought about Kagome first since he kept on insisting that he loves her... like they say, "actions speak louder than words"... and his actions didn't really show that... but there is consolation though Inuyasha did go back to Kagome... anyway great story though... good job...

Wow. That was so unexpected! Talk about drama! lol, I really thought he cheated on her. I love how the story turned out!

Good Job!