I really think your story is amazing... to me, you just expressed very well the despair and pain that life can bring us.
Snape was kind of weird... he acted like he wanted to hurt Harry but at the same time wanted to help him.
Blaise was so sweet and cute ! I wish he could have helped Harry more :(

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So did Harry die in the end?? I liked it. It was cool. It was a bit sad that he didn't get any help though. I would have thought someone would have noticed him leaving other than snape. Are you going to continue this or is it finished?

Wow.

Just wow.

It was so real, so absurd, I wish you the best of luck with future stories, and maybe you could write another one like this again.

You're an amazing author.

I like the ending, it works well. Brilliant story.

I like it, i feel though that it could have been broken up more, there were a few moments when there was scene change and i was a tad confused.

The ending may not be happy, but im curious if there could be more?

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sat down and read this and couldn't stop, certainly my favourite portrayal of the dynamic between snape and harry that i have ever read.

fukken win, man. -thumbs up-

It was truly a good story. I didn't expect it to be. Honestly. The ending was vague and you lacked page breaks to make reading and switching from time zone to time zone simpler for the readers. You successfully managed to catch attention however and keep it throughout the story though. I would gladly read more of your works. I doubt I will though. Maybe.

Err, did he just go away, or did he go to die?
Other than that kindof confusing last paragraph, this was a great chapter - - - THANKS

honestly I'm not completly sure if I liked this story or not. I couldn't stop reading, so I must like it, I think, but... I don't know. Not really helpful, isn't it. It definitely was interesting and different. I did like the way you described Harry, though. Well, and perhaps I shouldn't have, but I had to laugh at the scene with the sheeps...

I was caught up until the end, then I got confused, did he go into the forest to kill himself?

Hmm, while I don't think the actual plot line is plausible (i.e., Ron & Hermione dumping him like that & Dumbledore never trying to get Harry well) the writing itself is very good (a good writer could write about icing and make it miraculous). I liked the ending. It carried on the theme that Harry just sort of walked out of his life (figuratively in the beginning and physically in the end). I really enjoyed this even if it left me melancholy. My only other criticism is that the eating disorder seemed to come out of nowhere, whereas the self-harm was better supported. Great Job! (you rok)

-penguin girl

I was moved beyond words. It flowwed so well, the charecter's were perfect. Shame it wasnt longer, I wanted to know what happended to harry, if he finaly destroyed himself or if snape finaly stepped up, if ron or hermione ever noticed? the prophacy isnt mentioned here, because it would of fitted, because harry couldnt live when voldemort was alive, he was basicaly killing himself, but voldemort dying didnt change that. Is there a sequel or is the ending to make us think and question and come up with our own conclusions.

This was good. I went through some of this in high school. Still relapse, now and then. Although I think you had some trouble transitioning scenes, not to mention that Harry's eating disorder, or at least his illusions of thinking that he was too far kind of came out of nowhere. But overall, very real.

This was really good. I liked your realistic approach and development with Harry's multiple problems, and the ending was good.

I also liked the plot, and the relationship between Harry and Snape, as it was plausible, and it fit well.

Good job.

Beautiful story. You are an amazing writer. I love how you don't tell people the story, but rather paint a picture. Really I can't think of a thing to correct in it.