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Goddess Anjanee
2004-12-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was sad and beautiful at the same time.
angel718
2004-07-18
ch 1,
abuseits so sad! and haunting... its really well written. can u read my story? its called timewarp!.
XCatwomanX
2004-07-04
ch 1,
abuseYour mean! But your so good! OMG! That was amazing. I was crying so hard. Wow, where to begin? I too was waiting for the world to crack, and the river to devour me when in this story. You've opened up my eyes to this take. How would all the characters be? I loved how it was on Dinah's part. I know she would want a normal life... but... damn it. it's not fair! They fight so hard and get no recognition... ~cries~ Why did they cancel this show! ~cries~ Thank you so much for still writting and willing to keep it alive with your writting cuz in the end we need ppl like you to keep the legacy alive. Helena being dead... it would hurt so many. In a way she started it all. She kept the birds in such a unique state. I don't know how things would be w/o her. I mean, killing off Wade was one thing but Helena... you hurt my heart! Come back Helena! Don't go! Are you going to continue this? I suggest you do... prob like on Barbara's mind and Reese and Gibson and Alfred! ~cries~

Catwoman out!
KelleyGaither2000
2004-07-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseAt the risk of sounding redunant, wow. u just don't know how much you touched my heart with what you wrote. the utter simplicity of a friend's mourning combined w/all the complexities of emotion that make us human, you brought each and every one of those out in this, and in every story you write. You have a fan for life. Plz. plz don't stop writing!
VietAngel
2004-07-02
ch 1,
abusewow...I don't really know what to say. Somehow "emotional" doesn't seem to really do this piece justice. As usual, you've managed to describe things so vividly you can see the scene play out in your head as you read it. You stayed true to Helena's character (and everyone else's). Helena would never go out peacefully in her sleep when she was old and gray...she's more of a blaze of glory, die in battle type of woman, exactly how you described it. Excellent piece.
Roonie
2004-07-02
ch 1,
abuseI don't even have words right now...

That was one of the most beautiful, heart-breaking, soul-wrenching thing I've ever laid eyes on. Wow, Shawn...I...I just don't know what else to say. How do you do it? Where does this stuff come from? How can a person just sit there and type out something this incredible?

You put me right there with them. I felt their anguish...I felt everything. How did you do that? Your words are your gift, Shawn. You have the power to make people feel whatever you want them to...joy, anger, pain...there's really no limit for someone with your talent.

Please continue writing...never stop, in fact. Although this is my first review, I've been reading every one of your stories and now...I'm a lifelong fan. Thanks for sharing this part of yourself with us.

-Steph
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