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| redladyreba 2004-07-16 ch 1, | abuseThis was a great piece of work. I love third watch, and as I read this, I could actually hear the character's voices in my head. You really captured their essences well. I look forward to more. |
| MUZBNUTS 2004-07-10 ch 1, | abuseExcellent work! A powerful rendition of Yokas, Cruz, and Bosco! I didn't know you were also a fan of Third Watch. I've been watching since the beginning and I have to say that you've really captured the characters. You're a very talented writer! |
| crayonz 2004-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is so awesome!! I loved how you described everything. All th POVs. I loved each word of it! Awesome job! |
| bosco5649faith 2004-07-03 ch 1, | abusewow. you did a great job bosco's point of view. i could hear his voice in my head when i was reading. Very good! |
| IllStandByYou87 2004-07-03 ch 1, | abuseWow! I thought this fic was awesome! I loved it, you really captured the characters really well! I can't wait to read whatever else you write! |